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hello, dear fellow. this was an excellent chapter, i loved it but it was boring with so much talking about how to made gondolin a better city, it has been 14 chapters, let something happen for crying out loud. let them like eachother and have sex, sheesh..........and please don´t take too long on the next chapther, but it was good. bye!

After silently stalking your story I've decided I now have something to say that will be longer than "Wow". First off, lovely chapter as are all your chapters and your writing in general. Please note that I do not stalk just anybody. Things on this chapter that I liked specifically were the dinner conversation, Erestor's list of ways to kill Glofindel concept 432 and the rest of the 999 ways he was plotting (one of which I'm sure involves a staircase, don't ask why.), and my sincerest hope that Erestor does manage to get Secar transfered. I really don't like that guy.

That said I will now return to my place in the corner.

I loved how Erestor was actualy counting how "How to kill Findel", then how to get Secar trasferd! *Snort*

Oh I can Not wait for the next chap!

~DarkDremaer

How amazing! And an awesome Xmas present! I wish Santa would leave me homoerotic stories under the tree. I really enjoyed it when Erestor and Glorfindel kept going back and forth with bad things about each other from when they were kids. I loved it when Erestor was telling Glorfindel about the peasants and how to solve the problems. The butler elf is such a bitch, but I'm really glad 'cause what a funny situation. I'm really excited for Glorfindel to wake up in bed with Erestor.

Ah, Mawgy, another wonderful chapter with the brute Glorfindel still terrorizing Erestor, but a much bolder Erestor than before. And it looks like their relationship is getting a tad closer. I love it that Erestor is using his position as the Lord’s would-be lover to suggest things to him such as the fairer treatment of peasants. And at the end when he would think of using his status as Glorfindel’s lover to get the loathsome Secar transferred to the army is hilarious! I loved the dinner scene with Glorfindel watching Erestor eat, and the competition between them when going over their old school days! I laughed out loud at that!

The scene in bed was very seductive and sexy. I love that it didn’t go too far (leaving lots of good sex for later, I hope) and that Erestor surprisingly took a little bit of initiative in doing some things to Glorfindel, even if the main idea was at Glorfindel's suggestion. And I love how you show that Erestor maintains some measure of control as his mind shifts to different things while ministering to Glorfindel's needs, like how to kill him and make it look like an accident – LOL! The part where Erestor’s hand goes numb was very funny! What a hoot! And then the BRILLIANT ending! Glorfindel falling asleep on top of Erestor and Erestor can’t get up! OMG, I died laughing! And then Secar with the blanket! ROFLMAO! What a suspenseful ending! What’s going to happen next? (Rhetorical question.) OMG I can’t wait for the next chapter! Thank you for this lovely present and HAPPY NEW YEAR to you!

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All right I'll say it: I'm SORRY! Happy now? God no don't answer that, I'm being a bitch again. I just can't help it it comes so naturally to me, and I have this insane and unhealthy obsession with this story (your own fault for being such a good writer). Thank you for this bright spot inbetween the horrible relatives I just ate dinner with.....and now have to go back to, we're opening presents (I'm Norwegian, here we open our presents on the 24th). And by the way I loved the chapter; poor 'Restor, but Glorfy didn't treat him so badly this time. Please update soon, please???

*Giggles behind her left hand while pointing at a piece of chocolate cake* Hehehehe, it's all the chocolate cakes fault yenno! I mean, I told my mother-dearest not to give me three slices of that cake... And lookit me nowwww... Sugar-high, mwuahahahaha!! Well, from the story... I would guess that sooner or later, Erestor might become Glorfy's advisor? And that he might fall in love with Glorfy *eventually*, yah? O_O And yes, this was a very nice and LOOONG chapter. I wubbed it. *Pets it, still giggling* I was sorta pissed when that butler dood didn't help 'Restor... Is there something that Erestor doesn't know? I mean, there could be many *creepy* and dangerous secrets in the House of Golden Flower (or whatever), that he doesn't know... Ehem, can't wait for the next one! ^______^

~Ari

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wow pl;ease update soon i'd like to know what happens to Elistor

*Grabs Feet*
*Laughs at Stumps*
*Runs off into the Woods*

And that is how you came to lose your feet. That was a few chapters back though wasn't it? Ah well. Anyway! *SCREAMS* Lack of updating?! I cannot handle this, -especially- considering the point at which you left the story. Is it going to be rape, will Erestor jizz, will Erestor be prepared, will Glorfindel find the fight in Erestor he always longed for? Will I find my missing pop-tarts? All of it is pure speculation.

I think the fact that Erestor prepared himself just goes once again to point out his common sense. If I knew I was going to be bum-raped in a couple hours the most I would do would be whine over it. Cry to someone for help. If no one could help me I'd do nothing but moan and groan about it. To actually think, 'hey this might be less painful if I gel myself up,' well for one like myself that's just not something that would cross my mind.

Also, I have a question, though if it's too much of a plot-give-away don't answer. Which it kinda is, but at the same time not. I mean honestly it may have already been stated, or at least people would assume such, so perhaps it's not a plot-give-away. Moving on, when you say that this is an Glorfindel/Erestor pairing fic, does that mean pairing as in they will eventually not totally hate each other way? Or do you mean it in a Glorfindel is a jerk that totally destroys Erestor's mental health for the rest of his life sort of way?

Er, anyway! Awesome story! I hope this review isn't crappy. And I think you stole my pop-tarts.