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October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I apologize, but the grammatical errors are atrocious. Very, very hard to get past.
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first of all, the idea is very good, really. But the problem's with the spelling errors. One or two is understandable, you can't get it right all the time, but yours are numerous. Spelling and gramatical errors kill the mood of the idea, work on those and it'll probably be smoother and more flowing to read, rather than causing your readers to sit and analyze the situation with guessing what's going on and what those words are suppose to mean...
Good Luck!
~Kira
Good Luck!
~Kira