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Sigh... my eyes sting with tears, and my heart feels like it's going to leak - to burst, but not quite that... Had I been in that situation I might just have followed my beloved, I think... but I cannot know.
You write so well! You truly love the two Elves - it is clear to me. You make their love so strong that it is almost hurting...
Wow.

I love you

your devoted fan
ramie

A minute ago I was crying my eyes out laughing at some stupid TV show, now I'm crying for a completely different reason. I was having such a kick ass day and now I'm all sad and weepy. You so ruin my day Fishy. Beautifully done.

So how did he die? Are we talking the first time he died?? Or a second?? The plot (or rather, the lack thereof) if maddening. Nicely done, though, the grief seemed very real. I keep thinking how nice for elves, who KNOW that they will see a loved one again, even if it takes a long time.

Uh, is it all right if I mention you mean "lose" and "losing" and not "loose" and "loosing"? You let loose a horse, but you lose your keys. You are losing your mind (well, I am losing mine), but "loosing" would take a tricky and rare construction, such as, well, now that I think about it, I can't think of any use for "loosing."

Awww now dang it Fishyz I told myself I was not going to cry and then you wrote this part....

((I wrapped your tunic sleeves about me, imagining they were you arms, and nearly screamed
when I realised that it was loosing your scent))

Now see, that aint fair...now my nose is all stuffed.
Wonderful, wonderful "Letters"

~DarkDreamer

Wow.
Well done.
okay... I'm crying now. Good work! Bonus points for making me cry.

oh, that was sad... You made me cry:)