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person Jade
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay it's been a while since I have read the original but for themost part I can make out most changes and I have enjoyed them. This is once again become my favorite story to read.
person Jade
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I get to read it all again. Loved it the first time loving it now
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YEAYYYY!!!! You're doing an extended version of this! *jumps up and down in excitement*
I was really disappointed when I couldn’t find your stories anymore… I wonder why you took them out (did you?).
Well, anyway, it’s great to see you’re back and with a so much improved story!
Keep up the good work! You’re in my fav list ;)
person Spakhti
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh! oh oh oh oooooh!!! I didnt know you had posted this already- you sneaky wench! Weren't you susposed to tell me fings like that- oh hang on, you havent talked to me for about a bajillion years. NAUGHTY! But at least now youve finished your magnum opus for the fair, so you might have a spare 5 minutes to check in with your old pal every now and then ;) Love the Ithilin outfit by the way- fourth place is just frickin criminal! I bet the first three placed entries were not a patch (geddit- patch? hehehe) on yours. Perhaps theyre just sleeping with the judges? Oh well, at least youve got Leggy to keep you warm on the impending cold winter nights...
I love this new EE of Warrior, as I'm sure I've told you often enough by now. You can really see the improvement in your writing since I became your beta *big smug grin* hehehehehehehehee
Anyway, there are a few things I hadnt seen in this chapter, and I liked them a lot- like the scene with Father Grey at the end, musing on what is going to happen to Hesper and why its happening. Good job! If I didnt need a cup of tea so badly I would get straight to reading the next chapter, but I have a sneaky suspicion that it might be about a hundred thousand words long, and its so cold in my room my nippies could cut glass! So I think I shall make myself a hot beverage, snuggle myself up in your lovely fluffy fleece, and settle myself in for the morning. :)
Luv Jax
xxxx
p.s Dont be afraid to give me a poke on IM! I wont bite- hhhaaaard..... ;)