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for A Gift of Love

by suemichave

person Lady lovless
schedule February 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a big fan of Incet but I make an exception when it comes to these two. They're sooooo cute. Very good story Love it!!!


A gift of Love is the best gift to give.

Lady loveless
person Midnight
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A truly sweet story. I really love the topic you are writing about. Normally I am no fan of the I-narrator, but it totally fits to this story. I think it wouldn't have this depth of emotion and feeling if told by an omniscient narrator. And your writing style is great. I was so eager for the last two new chapters and now the two little ones finally arrived. They will have good parents and a life filled with love and happiness, I should think. Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Yours, Midnight
person nancy
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story but can you reformat so it fits on the screen with out having to scoll to read the rest of a line? It makes for a very unpleasent experence. I tried downloading it to a word program to edit it for easier reading but my Mircosoft word won't open do to auto up grades that don't give you user codes to activate. Sorry about that rant. I'm enjoying it so far I just tend to lose my place with scrolling side to side.
person Jayn
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I feel so happy for them. ^_^ PLEASE update soon!!!
person Vyver
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is, without a doubt, one of the best mpregs I have ever read. It definitely goes in the top 3 on my list.

I really like how you portray the dynamics of Elrohir and Elladan's relationship, it feels like something true. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
person Jayn
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They're together again! Nice. I was touched when Elladan spoke of how he imagined his lover sitting on the rock.I really liked that part. ^_^ PLEASE update soon!
person Jayn
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More! I love how detailed verything is/ You've thought of everything!! PLEASE update soon!!
person Jayn
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! An update!. I wonder how difficult the pregnancy will be... PLEASE update soon!!
person Jayn
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to find out what their child will look like! PLEASE update soon!! ^_^
person Jayn
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope it will all be okay. They deserve a happy ending. PLEASE update soon!!