AFF Fiction Portal
errorYou must be logged in to review this story.
person MarzBar
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A fun day way had by all! I enjoyed the three brothers and their measuring contest at the beach. It's chilly, dark and wet where I am now and that beach seems like heaven.
person gingersnap1993
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wish I was at the beach right now...ahhh...the surf, the sand, one of those drinks with the little umbrella, some naked elves...
person MarzBar
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been giggling and chortling along with the fillies! Thank you so much for the wonderful scene!
person gingersnap1993
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHEW!! I'm glad that's over. It's too bad that Tomy and the boy died, but they both fought bravely and will be honored. Poor Orophin...I can just imagine the look on his face...who knows, maybe he'll actually meet his 'son' one day...minus the fleas!! On to Hellenes...and some temple virgins...or a minotaur...or the Olympic Games...(hee,hee...the possibilities are endless). Great Chapter!! Love it!
person MarzBar
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a battle! These poor horse people seem to take a lot of damage from joining the elves in their adventures. And yes, what is next?
person MarzBar
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting thoughts on bravery and heroism from Celeborn.
person gingersnap1993
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods and elves...they're all very nearly the same if they happen to be male. Poor Tiger. I'm really not looking forward to her leaving Haldir. While they both love her and are undeniably passionate about her, it's kind of sad she isn't free to make her own choice. Will she at least be allowed to watch her cub grow?
person MarzBar
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! The Greeks had some rotten gods. Will Hal-Dear give Tiger her cub? Waiting for the fight with the Balrog.
person MarzBar
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Himeros is certainly having a go at Glorfindel. I do not like Himeros saying that some of them will die and that Glorfindel will have to save Haldir. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good dragon fight. I'm glad none of the riders died for that beast. What of Orophin's fears? Will he be able to stay with them until they find the balrog?