rate_review Reviews

Is this some kind of crossover? These are wonderful magical creatures and I am glad the dragon saved Haldir. More please.

The creatures in the story are from real myths of Asia, which is sort of where I see them going. The manicore is Persian and simply means maneater. the antelope that breathes gold dust comes from nothern India although there is a Hungarian legend of a white stag that is simlar. The dolphin legend is real, but from South America. The jinn tiger...Persia/Arabia, and the Chine dragon? Chine is French for Chinese.....and everyone knows Chinese dragons are nice..LOL I do not think of this as a crossover, only a pass over. BUt I am running out of magical creatures....and I am getting close to the Nazgul. The only things I haen't pulled up are a unicorn (and I really considered this one, but the virgin thing sort of blew that one off) and a flying horse. I am open for suggestions.

I am still thoroughly enjoying this story. Nice bit of desert smut with the lady and her retainers. Now, what will happen with the dragon rider? More soon please.

Regarding chapter 7: Take this portion of the review Tongue-in-cheek... Where you, penchance enjoying a few puffs from the gypsy's hashish pipe while writting this ?.. ;)
Might I make a suggestion?. Perhaps this humorous chapter might be better served as a separate outake ( sort of a PWP ) for this story. The reason I say this, is because it seems to detract from the up-to-now tense and erotically dark tone of your tale. You have woven a very interesting plot thus far and I, for one, look forward to seeing the riders resume their quest. :)

Off course I shall stay with the story!. Het or slash, good and interesting writting is always a pleasure to read!. And your story is most certaintly interesting :)

So far a very evocative and atmospheric story- very interesting. And i thought with nine hot elves showing up, there is bound to be slash. I'd like to read more but...

Here is my main problem with your story; in the headings there is no indication if this is to be het or slash and no pairings are listed. I hope you will rectify this even if there is to be NO sex and NO pairings, -that should be mentioned too. I personaly, am not really that interested in getting sucked into reading a het romance between an elf and Arwen or an OFC. Please realize there is a lot published here and most of you readers don't have time to read it all and DO unfortunatly have to make decisions on what to read based on the headings.

this is getting weirder and weirder, lol.

Teeheehee!! Haldir getting stoned! I love it and wish I could the same for him myself.

Nice interlude, especially for Glorfindel. Haldir could use fun. More please.

You are a tease! More soon please.