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person Spirit Melody
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. The intrigue deepens... Where *is* this going??? I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter of this thrilling story!
person JastaElf
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a chapter! Curiouser and curiouser! Mith has accused Legolas of stuff, but is here to rescue them.... I am so glad he is fond of these touching last-moment rescues! :-) Maybe now we'll get some answers... or not, seeing as Mith IS a wizard.... worse than Elves for saying both yeah and nay....

This is SUCH a neat story. I am dying to know what is going on, but I completely trust you to unwind the tale a bit at a time for my complete amusement and the amusement of others.... :-)

Thanks for the update, darlin'! We'll catch up soon!
person jamie
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing fic!!
It is so intriguing and riveting. Just leaves me hungering for more, but I know I'll have to patiently wait for each update!! Argh, you're killing me here!
person jaylen
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! The chapters are witty, funny and yet full of suspense. The bad language contest was cute. (I like the idea of Legolas and his grandfather being close. I could picture them playing the game and feeling like they were getting away with something.) I can absolutely see Olorin making the grand entrance, that is sooo... him.

Jaylen

P.S. Boy did I luck out. I happened to be on when you updated. I feel like I got a special treat tonight!!
person sivan325
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i read it on your website, and i'm waiting for your update.

i loved the cursing, it was quite of funny, hannon-le.

poor Legolas, and you KILLED GIMLI. oh well.

Sivan Shemesh
person JastaElf
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely riveting... GOD I love the way you use words!!! :-)

So! There's evil afoot... and accusations.... and badness... and poor Legolas is all banged up! All the elements I love in a tale.... *g*

I can't wait to see where you go with this. Your knowledge of science and the way you word-paint your images is just a superb combination--and I'm enjoying every moment of it!

Talk with you soon!

Hugs,
Jasta
person Hikaru
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome o_O
¡¡Please, more chapters!!
person Jaylen
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your new story!! It is different but in a good way. Can't wait for more.
Jaylen
person Thalionwen
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this new story of yours has thoroughly hooked me!. I am SO curious to see what happens next!! :)
person Spirit Melody
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely intriguing! These first two chapters promise some welcome originality in Legolas fics. Can't wait for more.