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person wetheril
schedule May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL!! Oh man, I could not help laughing about the titles of the books Erestor discovered in "strange Westron". XD And was that rectangular thing a cellphone he uncovered? I just started to read the story, and it was just so much funnier because the characters are serious, and the absurdity of juxtaposing modern day objects in the hidden cave behind the waterfall is just too amusing.
person Spirit Melody
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great new chapters to catch up on. This story is so excruciatingly intriguing - what on *earth* are Legolas & Gandalf involved in??? I hope to see a new chapter soon. Your writing is of an immense quality - there's so much pathos, but moments of comedy too. I love it!
person angharad
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, another interesting story! Been away and have just seen two new chapters are up (yay). I can say that the previous chapters have caught my interest (i.e. I have not got a clue what is happening and am waiting to read more so as to enlighten me) and am looking forward to catch up on my reading.

You are spoiling your readers by having so many great stories on the go, please oh please keep going on them all. :)
person JastaElf
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ABsolutely BRILLIANT!!! GOD I Love what you do with words.... there are just too many wonderful things to say about this... so I will limit myself to saying that the comment about the image of legolas cradling the non-screaming baby by moonlight was a gem among gems. So sweet a thing and yet "disturbingly erotic" as well....

I have no idea where you are going with this, but I love it, and am enjoying the ride. Now if I could only read your mind to find out the fate of Little!Legolas and the Balrog.... and his MANY kin.... don't ANY of those mothers love him?? I weep for the chance to see the Seniormost Mommy actually cuddle her nephew.... :-)

Thanks for this wonderful update! {{{hugs}}}
person kitty
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story the more i read. You have now began to weave a web of mystery regarding Legolas's past behaviour and his relationship with the twins and Gandalf himself and i love it.

Can't wait for an update as i follow all of your stories!
person Shanna
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola. This story is amazing, wonderful... a wonder to read ...


person kyou
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person Spirit Melody
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens! A very sensual chapter too. And well written of course :) Can't wait for more.
person Sesshyangel
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I am loooving this! I love that he isn't all so helpless (err- just fatally injured) and has got a loooot of spunk! LOL. Its like a complete opposite of the Him in Feud. Much as I love that story, don't you love this kiss-ass version of him?

PS: love the discription of him sitting there looking like a lost lil elfing.
person Sivan Shemesh
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

It's me again.

Nestegi, update more soon... love that word when it came from a mouth of elves, and yet you make me laugh of the curses. I love elvish. Teach me more... i'm so in love with your story, mellon-nin, that i cannot hold myself to read more, and i hope that you can also forgive me as i, as it seemed lurking more than usual to do some reviewing.

e-mail me, as i do not wished to spoil my review.

and darling please update your site, so i could read more... lol!

Waiting for more, as i am curious to know more. i also noticed that you stay with Erestor/Legolas couple, as i could see the sparkles of love that shown in their eyes as they cursing each other.

Perfect work, did i mentioned it?

Keep it up.

Sivan Shemesh