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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I finally got here to review! Sorry, my internet was turned off for a while (damn credit cards . . .they have to be soooo particular about when you pay them . . .lol), but I'm back now. I did have some little questions about this story.
1. If Arthon has never known elves, how does he speak elvish?
2. How is he supposed to remember his family if he was taken from them when he was about one month old?
3. Why is Elrond attracted to what is, for all intents and purposes, a ten-year-old? That kind of makes Elrond seem a little gross (at least to me). Please say that action of any kind will take place later on? When he's older?
Sorry to sound so critical; the story hasn't even really had a chance to prove itself yet, and here I am throwing all this stuff at you. Gomen nasai! They were just some concerns.
1. If Arthon has never known elves, how does he speak elvish?
2. How is he supposed to remember his family if he was taken from them when he was about one month old?
3. Why is Elrond attracted to what is, for all intents and purposes, a ten-year-old? That kind of makes Elrond seem a little gross (at least to me). Please say that action of any kind will take place later on? When he's older?
Sorry to sound so critical; the story hasn't even really had a chance to prove itself yet, and here I am throwing all this stuff at you. Gomen nasai! They were just some concerns.