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for In the Garden

by Sorsha

person MarzBar
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting chapter. What is this gift that was not given? The Valar are being cryptic (annoying). I hope the meeting with Celebrian is not too horrendous. More story please.
person MarzBar
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm. What will it take for the Valar to release Elrond from his marriage? They can clearly see he has found a true mate now and he surely has earned the comfort this bond would create. More please.
person seansbeanie
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a moving chapter! I had to read most through a veil of tears. You have brought these wonderful characters to life (all puns intended).
person EC
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of your best chapters. It brought tears to my eye .thank you forreminding people how much pain elrond suffered. it's amazing he didn't fade but imust be his human side that pull him though.
now i'm waiting !!! for the next chapter. you know me number one fan eager to read more.
EC
person seansbeanie
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I continue to be amazed and delighted with your tale. Your knowledge of the "Sil" and its history is remarkable. I anxiously await every new chapter. Your word imagery is such that I feel myself in the healing embrace of the garden and its caretakers.
person MarzBar
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"And Now We Come to It" is a fabulous chapter. The memories and the banter and teasing were so nicely portrayed. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, weeping here. Not bad tears, just a combination of sad, happy and amazed. You are such a good writer.
person MarzBar
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff between the Valar and the Eldar and the Maiar. I am truly impressed with your writing.
person MarzBar
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter. I look forward to reading about the healing process for the friends.
person Zelha
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Estë! She will know from Elrond's heart that everything was messed up between him and loony Celebrian xDD
Very well done, Sorsha!
I'm looking forward to Elrond's encounter with Manwë and Varda, and also Mandos!
Great story! I looooooooove it! ^___^