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for In the Garden

by Sorsha

person EC
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey
Imust have zone out somewhere. How the heck did I miss this chapter. That it no more guarding those north fences. Ibeen checking this site and miss this chapter. here it is the New year and I'm just reading this. Hey Valar Next Christmas you get some one else to guard those trails!!!
My grands will never forgive me. Love this chaper as always
numberone (head somewhere else)
EC
ps til recovering from that patrol it really took the wind out my sails.
person seansbeanie
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this lovely Christmas gift!!
person MarzBar
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful Winter Solstice celebration. I hope it helps Meril to come back to life regardless of her foolish and crruel mother. Thank you so much for the winter chapters. I look forward to all your tales.
person EC
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great Chapter waiting to see the next one. you did a good job with the meril father,when dose her mother geta wake up call.
number one fan
EC
person seansbeanie
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is so much I love about this story! You have drawn me in with your beautiful tale. The characters seem so real; their actions and reactions believable. Please hurry with the next chapter. I long to stay "In the Garden."
person MarzBar
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the wonderful chapter and the swim in the lake. We all know it's time for Elrond's petition to the Valar; will we have to wait until the sequel for that to happen? Still love this story and wait for what you have time and energy to give us.
person EC
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sharon ,
absolutly great as usual, I glad Los's huband didn't whimp out.
also that was a rotten thing she did to her daughter but that's RL.
lots of men and women do those thing to their kids. Great writing.
Number one Fan
EC
person Anne
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! I'm sorry that your real life interfered so much that you couldn't update much recently - I look forward to it every time I load the site. Seems to me Los has a TON to learn yet about her actions and I hope you don't lose the intensity you've kept up so well. I'm loving this and glad that the story is coming along so nicely :) Great work thus far and am already drooling in anticipation of the next story too :)
person MarzBar
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for coming back to this. It's good to see Elrond having hope and Celebrian beginning to acknowledge her weaknesses. I await the petition to the Valar. More story please.
person mk
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
happiness for elrond.
a wonderful story for a great character!