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for Mael-Gul

by Aislynn

person Ertia
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it is so good to be home. Even if home is the darkness of Moria.
My apologies for my long absense. Real-life has taken it's toll, but this time it's a price I'm gladly paying! It has been too long since I've read! I was three chapters behind! Ah, and not single word of it disappointed. I love every word of this story.
The conversation with Mithrandir did not disappoint! And Boromir, finally recognizing that Legolas is a kick-butt warrior and offering his freindship! Ah, perhaps the fellowship shall finally become one! (But we all know what happens next, don't we?)
person DrkDreamer
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing in a while - caught up reading today.

I'm very impressed with how you handle action scenes - I felt like I could actually see what was going on. (Something I really suck at...)

I really liked seeing Baromir come to a change of heart about Legolas - he expressed himself well!

I'm anxious to know what happens next - what other dangers lurk in the caves.
person nikkiling
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Legolas should sleep... *yawns*.... and so should I! LOL Sleepy Legolas is making me sleepy!
I am so happy that Boromir is behaving more.... civily. I like nice Boromir. His conversation with Legolas was heartening.
And Yay!! They've made Moria!! I didn't think they'd ever get there! hehehehe For some reason, ever since they left Imladris, I've been waiting for Moria. *scratches head* Not sure why. All that darkness.... much can happen in the dark....
person nightbreeze
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So who where these mistery people?
person surreysmum
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OK, it's probably not good netiquette for a beta to review her author, but I just have to say here in public, if only once, what a tremendously fine piece of work this it - so well-thought-out, so deeply felt, and, for those of us who like our kink, so very thrilling (when you choose to grace us with it, you tease!) (Oops, sorry, when you choose to grace us with it, Mistress!) Keep writing, Ms Crowdaughter!
person nightbreeze
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Actually she's level four now almost level five. I love playing D&D Ah yes Greater Mage armor and remember close only counts in horseshoes and fireball spells.

You've given me more to think about one this fic. I keep wondering about Kleptomir... I mean Boromir and Aragorn
person Nikkiling
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to join the kerfuffle! Hehehehe.... What a great word!
I'm so happy to see a new post! I've been checking in here nearly every day waiting for you to do so.... I just LOVE this story!
And I think it's great how Boromir is starting to rethink his thoughts on Legolas being a weakling. And how Legolas seems to have finally purged this thoughts on stealing the ring (for now?)
Again, great update! I can't wait for more!
person Homer
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:Bursts into hysterical laughter: This is a comedy right? Lorien and Imladris launch an attack on Mirwood, then take the wood elves as sex slaves. If there's one thing to say, it's original. Yes, it came from one sick mind.
person Ertia
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!
Returned to TWO chapters! *does happy dance*. Glad Aragorn finally talked to Gandalf, and BRAVO to Gandalf for lecturing him on waiting so long.

Funny, I actually was almost cheering for Legolas to take the Ring! To slay Aragorn and Boromir, decieve Gandalf and take the Ring and run. What power could he wield? What destruction for Elrond?
Hmmmmm... my thoughts may still be a bit dark to continue "Fifteen Years" just yet! lol But I'm working on it. Expect something there by next Friday, even if I do get a bit distracted by Pirates! ("An Undead Monkey!")
person Unseelie
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but it makes e so sad to see Aragorn be such a pussy to the elves, and suach a sadist. But it is really well written. May I ask, what you are trying to say? Is this story about human nature? Or perhaps about how real trust cannot exist in any relationship? I was not certain what to read in this, but the imagery, while disturbing, was very concise and clear.