rate_review Reviews

Your story has wiped my mind... in a good way ^_^; I feel no hate towards Glorfindel - actually, I feel kind of bad for him since he doesn't have a nice, submissive Erestor to screw o_O Elrond, definite hate. He needs to be tortured and then killed by Legolas x_X Or turned into a frog and run over... or something... Aragorn I don't feel too much hate towards, but~ he certainly has some mental problems. Does Gandalf happen to be a certified psychologist? How about Galadriel? ...no? Oh well, guess you'll just have to torture Legolas s'more!
Hey~ Arwen's kinda like us - she wants to watch, too XD Oh dear...
Your first chapter said Legolas/Gimli... I'm curious as to how you're going to do that... Please don't let it be too frightening x_x *scared of short furry men*
I only came across a few typos and one or two awkward sentences but overall the grammar is pretty good! ^_^
Can't wait for you to continue ^_^b Love!

Oooh! Nice work with the trial! So unfair of Elrond to put Mirkwood back on the spot instead of just finding something suitable besides death or dismemberment for Legolas. Ah well, Elrond is obviously under a dark influence....wonder who he's going to Leg's sister to? Is that part of this story?
Two more chapters before we get to punish Legolas? Ohhhh... all right! I'll be patient. :D

*waiting as patiently as possible* Hurry UP! Lets torture Legolas!!!!!!!!!!!!
errr... I mean... ah... I hope Elrond doesn't errr...do any permanent sorts of ummm... damage...

I love this story! It's a fascinating new take, on the original idea! Well written, creatively-voiced visuals! Great job! Can't wait for each new chapter!

I love how you manage to entwine the book, movie, and your own story so well, particularly when your story differs so greatly from the other two! Beautiful work! I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds, and what Elrond will do when he gets his hands on Legolas. *shiver* That elf is evil!

I'm still reading through this but I must say the Elrond is a "putz!" I'm not sure how this is going to end but I truly hope some serious comeupance is in the future, especially for Elrond and Estel. I haven't made my mind up about Glorfindel and the twins yet. Grrrrr.....

Well, I love it! *grin* You write very well (although I think it's nipple, not nibble *laughs*), and I really love the plot thus far. A little pleasure, a lot of pain...wonderful! *grin* And that curse is quite something! I love the basis of it, with the poisons excreted from the prostate and all. I'm really interested in how it's initially applied, and if someone will eventually find an antidote or something.... very fascinating!
Anyways, wonderful job, and I look forwards to the next chapter!