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for The secret life

by Githoniel

person Carinito
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I ADORE YOU!!! This chapter had it all! Somehow I wouldn't care if I went on my hands and knees saying "gimme gimme" hehe. but i'm not that greedy!... I love the twin angst, you really nailed it their! My poor twins T-T secrets don't stay hidden forever! The same could be said for Legolas. To think a few words could change someone... to bad those words weren't spoken! There will be a day when I shout "FINALLY!"... but until then... Great job! You mi alemana will go far! I look forward to the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You may have struggled with that chapter, but I thought it was excellent. I loved finding out why Haldir was so bitter and I'm very excited about the trip to the caves. Can't wait for more!
person Ertia
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Sad for Haldir, frightened for Elrohir and Elladan! EEEK!
Not to be a greedy mouse, but more, please?
person Ertia
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Sad for Haldir, frightened for Elrohir and Elladan! EEEK!
Not to be a greedy mouse, but more, please?
person HHS
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!Stop him!!!
person HHS
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're right.What's a story without mystery and intrigue?Want to know what Sarik's going to do after he's punished what he almost did to Legolas.YIKES!Haldir is remembering because of Legolas' eyes.
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter! Each one is better than the last and an update always makes my day:)
person HHS
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!That was sad that Elladan seems to holding on to his anger.As for Sarik,castration?MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
person DurOltha
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To the Golden Wood he goes! Beautifuly done chapter...I loved how Erestor
handled the situation, promising no intamacy, only help...wonderful.

~DarkDreamer
person Ertia
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Good chapter!
And a wonderful excuse to send Legolas to Lorien, too, where, mayhaps, he'll meet Haldir once more? YAY!