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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eh.. though the idea is nice enough and the dialogue is rather well written, that's the problem. This is ONLY dialogue, it's like reading a play instead of story. There are no true environmental descriptions at all!
You should definitely consider rewriting this
Cheers!
You should definitely consider rewriting this
Cheers!
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It wasnice to see the twins bound. I don't think I read about them biinding before. Thanks. Keep up the good work.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haldir did remember his promise.THAT WAS SO SWEET!!!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
for an advisor erestor acts very stupid and childish. he is taught in politics and secrency so he should know that glorofindel couldn't go against the orders and wishes of lord elrond or of the king of greenwood.
now i go back to the story.
liked it much so far :-)
now i go back to the story.
liked it much so far :-)
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.. *tear* a beautiful ending my bunny! I absolutely LOVE the ending. So CUTE!!
*tear* it’s over but it was nice while it lasted! You did Sarik an honor. Though many of the readers, i’m sure, would have loved to see him ... die a VERY painful death.... I liked his ending. You redeemed him. ^-^
*grin* Oh the twin love and the rest ended lovely!
I also like the ending conversation with Haldir and Legolas. Hush hush! hehe. Great job love!!!
All in all.... *sniff and smile* :) hehe
*tear* it’s over but it was nice while it lasted! You did Sarik an honor. Though many of the readers, i’m sure, would have loved to see him ... die a VERY painful death.... I liked his ending. You redeemed him. ^-^
*grin* Oh the twin love and the rest ended lovely!
I also like the ending conversation with Haldir and Legolas. Hush hush! hehe. Great job love!!!
All in all.... *sniff and smile* :) hehe
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..............O_O............ Oh my love!!!! I ADORE YOU!!! my heart was pumping through out reading! It was... is my favorite chapter!
ahhhhhhhhh... *heart attack*..... *breathe*... *breathe*.... T-T I love you!!!! ....I live for cliffies! Yours are always a thrill!
^-^ protect you I will! *shift eyes*... hmmm who is a threat?.... o_o Found one!! *grabs elven rope* ^-^ be right back love!.... Woah... that one just didn’t want to go down! hehe. I’ll always be with you! hehe. And update when you can!... no threats from anyone!
ahhhhhhhhh... *heart attack*..... *breathe*... *breathe*.... T-T I love you!!!! ....I live for cliffies! Yours are always a thrill!
^-^ protect you I will! *shift eyes*... hmmm who is a threat?.... o_o Found one!! *grabs elven rope* ^-^ be right back love!.... Woah... that one just didn’t want to go down! hehe. I’ll always be with you! hehe. And update when you can!... no threats from anyone!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Here it come! the true review!
*close eyes*
oiiii my poor little prince charming!
*close eyes*
oiiii my poor little prince charming!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you have to update soonest!!!! *whines*
i bet its evil sarik again!
i bet its evil sarik again!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This new look of AFF.net is really different.Anyway,one guess as to who hit Legolas?Bastard!!!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bastard Sarik!I hope that Haldir gives him a lesson that he won't ever forget.