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for Killing Beauty

by outlawblue

person MarzBar
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods these "people" are horrid. Poor Haldir. Can they save him and the dingbat princess?
person MarzBar
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still do not understand why these people feel the need to harm elves. Can the wild woman save Haldir?
person MarzBar
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where did these vile, cruel, brutal creatures come from? So frightened for Haldir.
person moxie
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that is one evil B**tch!! Poor Haldir! I wonder what this training reveals?...I can't believe Haldir was bested!
person moxie
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great continuation! Thank you! I loved the lines "I love you." and then Haldir replying "I know." But don't you think it's a little fast for Ashva to so suddenly fall in love with him? She just really met him and she seems like a free-spirit and goes through men like tissues. Is she immortal?
person MarzBar
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Haldir, our beautiful, arrogant March Warden is going to fall in love with a wild woman? More please.
person MarzBar
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice that the beautiful, arrogant Haldir is using Han Solo's lines. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first I've heard about ellyths being in heat. Ashva is lucky to be with Haldir for this.
person moxie
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the quick update! Do you mean "warg" instead of "wag"?
person WorshipAllElves
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I have really enjoyed reading it. I love Haldir's portrayal in the story. Arrogant, in control, yet playful. He's so yummy! Please update soon.