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for Killing Beauty

by outlawblue

person MarzBar
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your Chapter titles. I hope Rumil and Orophin found all the people following them. Kalan will come looking for them soon I fear. More please.
person moxie
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A chapter with a sweet ending!
person moxie
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Also, is a year really all that long in an elf's life? Even humans mourn longer than that. But, yes, I know that Haldir is not one to get too sentimental.
person MarzBar
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! They have to get Elrohir to safety. Can they use his connection to Elladan to help find him? What has happened in Gondor that there are all these really bad men?
person moxie
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sad. Are you trying to ease us into an unhappy ending? =).
person MarzBar
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does Orophin know how Haldir feels about the situation? Are the thugs from Gondor closing in on our elves? More soon please.
person moxie
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kalan is so damn scary. I must say - I'm not too into this whole incest thing. Thanks for the update! So, will Haldir *ever* admit his deep, abiding love for Ashva? To her face.
person MarzBar
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Along with the intrigue and mysteries about the bad guys, are we going to get lots of threesomes or foursomes with our beautiful elves? More please.
person MarzBar
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Kalan has the Steward of Gondor under his control? Haldir is going to have to kill Kalan again to rescue Elladan. Looking forward to three-way smut. More please.
person moxie
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You were right- that was a lot of action! I love when Haldir gets bossy. He really is most arrogant isn't he? His previous grief has not quelled that. Oh no! to Elladan being taken down (he's dead isn't he?) but I hope Elrohir heals. And so I detect a romance with Tarla? Obviously this elf who leads Orcs is Kalan reincarnated. Damm him. Now let me get this straight - he was using arrows similar to Gondor? Is trying to create a war? Is he scheming? Anyways, thanks for updating!