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for Killing Beauty

by outlawblue

person moxie
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The End?! The End?! =(. =(. =(. =(.
person MarzBar
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sob, indeed. I'm happy to see that Haldir came to her. I hope they find a way to put up with each other for a very long time. Thank you for sharing with us.
person moxie
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely ending. I'm happy for Ashva. She's doing something for herself. But will she fade? Can an elf fade if they're not bonded?
person moxie
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god that man is arrogant. He wanted Ashva to live with him AND his MISTRESS? I hope she leaves and keeps him wanting. and what was with that whole "don't be too jealous" talk they had? If Haldir can have his women, why can't Ashva have her men? I know- she has nature which calls her away, but still. When is he ever going to learn?
person MarzBar
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Haldir has more than met his match. I find it hard to believe that he lives with a mistress and invites Ashva over to join them, then has the nerve to be angry with her for thinking about leaving. He is so wonderfully arrogant. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good for Rumil. I'm happy to have Haldir see the sun again. More please.
person MarzBar
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YIKES!! Haldir is seriously injured and Ashva is getting him off?!? Does she mean to kill him? More please.
person MarzBar
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Haldir met his match! Will he recover? Did Rumil kill the evil Kalan? More soon please.
person MarzBar
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffie there! I'm praying for Haldir to kill Kalan with a minimum of injury to himself. More soon please.
person MarzBar
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How much should we worry about Haldir going up against Kalan with his injury? More please.