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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person TopazKat
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... food posioning... that sucks, but it makes sense. I hope Haldir eventually comes out of this and isn't too upset that he's not having an elfling. And poor Elrond, everyone needs to stop sneaking up on him like that, *giggles*.
person Marille
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh.. Haldir and Taurcalad really had a moment there. They seemed to understand each other very well and bring out what the other did not want to admit. And I would be nervous if I was Thoniel. Maybe someone needs to have a serious talk with Taurcalad and explain that love does not have to mean overpowering or posessing. Gentle can be as incredible, if not more meaningful.
Elrond in his dress... Well I guess if it works, then why not? :-)It's not the cover that counts, it's the heart inside that does.
person Lavinia
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NAAAUUUU!! It was too short... *weeping*
heh, just found your story, read all of it in one night :D
awesome,entertaining ;D
we want more!
write pwees??
I absolutely love Thoniel (did I spel that correctly?) and Taurcalad pairing :D
Love it love it love it
(and yes, if you haven't yet realised, I'm insane...)
person Marille
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol funny :-D Poor Mel though, Haldir will be paranoid from now on.

Ty for the reply also. I know he is already taken but... well it played out good in my head and I can't help having a mix of 'naughty' and adventurous going with it.
person Eon Kitty
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot!! i love your story!! :-D
person Blushing
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"He has finally lost his mind" Yes I agree, that cookie dough mut have made him go all loony on them:D
person TopazKat
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... Haldir pregnant? oh this does not bode well, and yet also promises to be immensely amusing. I can't wait to see how this will play out.
person sasalou
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank you, thank you I am so grad you updated. I just can't wait to read more.
person TopazKat
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back. Hee, it's fun to see how long this going on and how wonderful each chapter is. I re-read the whole thing while you on hiatus and giggled every time I read that you were close to finishing. When it is finally done, I will be both sad and happy, and amazed. I could never write anything this long.

Now, comments for this chapter. Glorion is simply adorable with Taulkas, but I have to agree with him, it might be very dangerous for him to take little Glorion as a lover with Erestor being his parent. I hope we also get to Torfindel's bonding circle soon, it would be fun.
person Marille
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like you had a wonderful time and are now back full of energy :)

Loved the new chapter though it seemed a bit odd that Tulkas could consider Glorion as a possible lover when the child calls him his third daddy. Very confusing for the child, to say the least ... I thought at first Tulkas had a soft spot for Erestor (his fiesty elf) and it was being shown with his attachment to Glorion ... As well as his unknown want for his own child showing without him realising.
The interaction between them is very sweet though.
What Glorfindel might think about Tulkas having a soft spot for Erestor ... As grown adults I am sure they would have worked something out.