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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person Denise
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! Glorfindel and Erestor are fantastic.

I enjoy your writing!
person TopazKat
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was painful, just the idea of what they were seeing... so hard to imagine that it can happen, even though it has. I did like the one attempt at light-heartening that the twins had; it would have to be necessary for them to go on I would think. Amazing chapter.
person Nuinzilien
schedule November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::scowl:: All of these allusions to Glorduin's nastiness are making me worried. And just WHY is poor li'l elfling 'Findel bound NAKED in his bed?!
person Logan
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I fell inlove with your story the first time I read it and just wanted to tell you that I think you are an amazing author with alot of talent - 190chapters, this is the longest story/book I've ever read

Looking forwards to more
Logie
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Urwa! xD *giggle**snort* That's too cute.
Ooooo *huggles sign* Another too cute
Hmm... 'Lord' eh? Wonder who that could be *looks around curiously*
person Sinsi
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Urwa! xD *giggle**snort* That's too cute.
Ooooo *huggles sign* Another too cute
Hmm... 'Lord' eh? Wonder who that could be *looks around curiously*
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Woops, that's me. Computer just did a monkey flip and didn't log me in x.x
person Nuinzilien
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous chappie, Dark, as usual...you'd best resolve that evil cliffie soon, though...someone might have to camp on your doorstep otherwise ::grin::


Wonder when the word bit started? Did Glorduin have one? Did his Sire? His Grandsire?

Answers now!



~~Nui
person TopazKat
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... so much going on in one chapter. I loved Torfindel's interaction with his family and lover, and it's wonderful to see Glorduin being so charming and funny, he really has come a long way since he was brought back. And while I know that Vel and Ron will be able to help Glorfindel, I thought it was very funny that they had to drug him frist. As they said, what better way to prevent him from strangling them? Hopefully, this dream of his of being licked by, presumably, Mandos, will not frighten them.
person Sinsi
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... I give you the longest drabble award.
When I first started reading this... drabble, I fell in love with it instantly. All your characters came to life and different personalities came forth. I'm not really into het, but I instantly fell in love with Hur and Mira. In fact, I may soon be contacting you about some information about Hur's first wife/children *winkwink* *nudgenudge*
And this last chapter, it made me sooo happy. Ever since Namo first appeared, I can't help but imagine him with someone xD
Now you're saying he likes Glorfindel =O Am I sensing a sorta threesome thing happening? O.o
Oh, and last thing, you've mentioned Irmo a little bit, but when's he going to make an appearance? Someone go walking along and see him swinging in the garden, ha.
Ah! And last, last thing, you have to have Gwee make a sign along the lines of: "Imladris; favorite vacationing home of the Valar"
Oh! Last, last, last thing! (I swear it's true this time) What about Celeborn and Galadriel... err... Maybe just Celeborn. When's he gonna come visit? xD
~Sinsi
person Possessed-Gummy-Bear-Inferno
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I...am...speechless! NEVER have I read a story as entertaining, heartwrenching, more hilarious than this! Everytime I would click the next chapter button, I both dreaded it and yet loved it! The smut was A plus! and I loved the nickname "rabbit". I have some rabbit bobblehead pens and everytime I pick it up I automatically think of Erestor. Wow. 189 chapters! Please! You must update! Just the way you wrote it made it seem as if you were actually THERE, witnessing the events! (but maybe you don't want to witness Avarian elves going at it.) O.O...I wouldn't find though...jus as long as I don't get bitten...I highly doubt that any stories can top this off! This is raising the bar! Oh yeah, before I submit this review I hafta hug Glorion and Elrond (in his pink!dress) and the Valar and Glorfindel and- ok...I think you get the point..hehe...point...I wanna touch his swords...