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I started following this story on the old AFF site and then everything disappeared. When the new site came up I figured that I would probably find it again. However I couldn't even get to the fanfiction section, all I could get was the forum. Just by chance I ran across the web site. For the last 2-1/2 days I have been reading. Just now caught up.

Child, don't apologize for your spelling or anything else. Your ability to tell a story this long with this many characters and pairings, with plots, sub-plots and plots on more than one plain, is enough for anyone to handle. So spell check doesn't always work, and Oli goes on vacation, or you want to please your fans and post a little early - if we can't put up with a little misspelling, we shouldn't read until everything is betaed and polished. I have enjoyed this all along the journey and am looking forward to reading more of your work.

I loved this chapter. Reminds me of my younger brother Ryan. When he was little he once ate a penny he found on the ground :-P

hey you...
thanks a whole big BIG bunch for the CDs, they are great, keep the world record size fic a coming, (do you know it's over 2mb now?)phew!
oli...x

Oh good. The twins can work on Glorduin while his mate works on his father, I like that idea. And it sounds as if Taurcalad and Thoniel's bonding will be very interesting indeed.

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Uh-huh... That's why it's my birthday tomorrow (November 23rd) And I'm turning 21... Don't you just love things like this? *rolls eyes*
Anyways, I love the chappie, poor Glorduin. Him and crying babies don't mix too good :-P Anyways, hope you have a happy Thanksgiving, eat lots of turkey, it's good for the soul ;) ...Erm... Well at least rabid plot bunnies enjoy eating it ^^

Well, at least Glorduin is trying. Considering the amount of harm he did to Glorfindel as well as what he experienced from his own father, it's a very good thing that he went to get help right away when Glorion was crying. I thought it was cute when he was encouraging him to stand on his own though, better to tell the child that they can do it themselves and help them than to do it for them usually. And I loved the image of the twins being shocked by the pleasure Glorfindel has shared with Erestor while dreaming, that was amusing.

keep it going mate, you're doing an excellent job..xx

Poor Glorduin.. You can tell he regrets what he did =( All I can think of him saying is: "If I had another chance, I would of done it completely differently." :-)

I can’t wait to read more of this wonderfull story, so please update soon for I want to know what happens next!

I liked this chapter, This was written. But update soon, please.