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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person TopazKat
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... this is getting even more interesting. I wonder who will be attacked next to leave poor Thranduil naked. ^_^ I am curious as to what exactly is going on with Erestor's sister, other than that she is very protective of him and seems to lothe warriors. It will be very difficult for many of the others to do anything as simple as to go near her.
person Ertia
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Two chapters!
But you're leaving us THERE??? Who is that with Legolas??? AHGGGH! Too many questions! Want answers! Not fair!
*sigh* All right, I'll be a patient mouse.... patient ... patient...
person Rei
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally got around to reading this. ^_^ And I'm enjoying it so far. Up to chapter 3. I wasn't going to review until I finished reading all the chapters, but I just had to say... Elrond/Thranduil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay!!!!! ^______________________^ Favorite pairing ever. Also, Erestor is absolutely adorable. Loved the accidental bonding.

I'm normally more articulate than this, but it's almost 1:00 AM. ^ ^;;
person Githoniel
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was sooooo.... wonderful. The story gets better and better with every chap. I especially liked the Rumil/ Haldir part. I was always a fan of well- protected little brothers. Elladan will have a hard time, courting the pen-neth. Can't wait to read more... Thran and Rondy on the balcony - divine! Oh, I can understand why Elladan and Legolas fled. Even the thought of parents having sex makes one shudder, let alone to hear them... And the thing with Erestor's sister, simply thrilling!!! Please more... :)
person TopazKat
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... lots of stuff going on. And not all of it dirty. I was happy to see that you were putting Elladan with someone, though I hadn't expected Rumil, but I love the little twist it's setting up. And I am equally curious to see who is pouncing on Legolas.

I am also very interested in this element of Erestor's sister. You have hinted at a few things here and there and I am intrigued to see where they go.
person nikkiling
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not fair! I was just coming back to review the last chapter, and the chapter before that which I somehow missed, and you've already posted again! You're too fast! You make me look bad. *grin*
Wonderful chapter! You had me going through my mental list of elves there at the end, trying to figure out who was left single for Legolas... unless you're bringing in a newbie. Let's see... unless there is someone new coming in from Lorien... Lindir or Melpomaen?
And I love the scene between Thranduil and Rondy. *snicker* And the poor guard! At least he seems to be enjoying himself!
And of course, i can't wait to see more between Cirdan and Elrohir. I really love those two together!
person Thalionwen
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My home has been under such ferocious thunder ( and lighting! ) storms for the last week that I just got a chance to catch up with my reading and writting!. And, whoo-hoo!!! I find 3 new chapters of your story to delight in. From Cirdan making his intentions know to Elrond, Elrohir whispering, Glorfindel scooping Erestor into the Hall of Fire; Erestor getting ALL drunk on Haven wine and then turning into a sexual firebrand, to Glorfindel re-claiming his sword... WOW!. Have I told you yet just how much I LOVE this story?! :) :) :)
person HMica
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks after reading the last two chapters* I would say that Erestor went from slightly toasted to flat-out baked! Wow, was he different thanks to the booze he downed so quickly. I do hope that he is feeling better soon, that way he can get even more flustered when he realizes what he did to Glorfindel. *laughs*
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo... I think if I were Glorfindel, I would keep Erestor drunk... such a wicked rabbit. So, Erestor has a sister and she musn't know and .... (*still brooding*) YOU ARE SOOOOO CRUEL, YOU KNOW!!! ;-)
Hugs
Githoniel
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK- forget my request about the wine. My friend said to me today, that I may love the elves, but behave like a dwarf... and all just because I drank a malt beer today!!!