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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person nikkiling
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Elrond said 'eew!' I love it! The eew-ness is spreading!!!
Great chapter by the way!
person Thalionwen
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holly Hanna!. Those last two chapters had Romantic elves, Ponding eles. masturbating elves, eloping elves, tracking elves and one irate Haldir!... DarkDreamer, you are killing me!. What what a way to go.... ;) ;) ;)
person Thalionwen
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaargh!. What the hell is ' Ponding eles". What I meant to say was pounding elves. I hate it when my fingers get crossed on the keyboard. But while I am here again... Can't wait for your next update! :)
person Ertia
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D

Hmmm... Haldir isn't happy. Elrond is hung... well.. hung.. well..err... Thran needs better lube, I think. And Rumil is very young, but awfully darling! YAY!
I needed this after this weekend! Thanks!

person Aglarien
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*whispers softly in Dark's ear* Oh, Dark...this is your muse, Dark. *Yeah...muse...that's it* Orophin is lonely, Dark....love is all around him and he's all alone. Lindir is lonely, Dark....Elrond has Thranny, Cirdan has Elrohir, Erestor has Glorfindel, Elladan has Rumil, Haldir has sweet little Mel...and poor Lindir has no one....He and Orophin are all alone....so sad, Dark....must do something for poor lonely Orophin and Lindir....
person Githoniel
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woohooo... Elronds "weapon" - who would have guessed he's hiding such a magnificent sword under his heavy robes- *snort*
So, Mel is speaking nonsense while lovemaking, lol, oh, I would love to hear, eh read that!!!
And I'm so curious about Rumil and Elladan!!!
Great update my friend... please give me more of that, yummy!!!

Githoniel
person Ertia
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D
Awwww. That was sweet! Well worth the wait, mellon!
Please don't make us wait so long for more!
person Thalionwen
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I finally had a chance to cath up wih my reading and have just devoured chapters 17 to 23. WOW!! Those were some plot twists!. Elladan loves Rumil... Cirdan and Elrohir are..ahem..perfectly suited for each other ( that line you wrote: " Elrohir smiled as he nodded, then smacked Cirdan across the face." had me in hysterics!. I could just see it for the endearing gesture it was meant to be, for two who like rough bed-play.. ). And then Erestor's sister... What a story, what happened to them. I can see her desire to protect her brother keeping her from fading, ot leaving Arda to heal her mind. And Legolas and...Gildor!. Ay! cannot wait for your next update... This is one hell of a tale, mellon nin. :)
person Ertia
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! So Erestor's sister seems alright, as long as she doesn't feel threatened. Heh... too funny for Gildor, asking to write a goodbye note to Legolas!!!
And now Elladan and Rumil alone in the woods together? Hmmmm.... perhaps sending Glorfindel would have actually ensured them returning? ;)
person TopazKat
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Elrond, it's a smart idea to keep that bit of knowldge that Legolas and his lover have been together for a bit longer than they should be. And as for Rumil getting to be with Elledan for a while Whoo-hoo! ^_^ I hope things go well for him.