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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person Ertia
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee! Two chapters to come home to! Poor Rumil! He has no idea what he's getting himself into with Elladan! Perhaps he'll need to have a talk with Cirdan! And speaking of which, mean mean Elrond teasing Thran! I do hope our golden King has a chance at revenge.
Yes, Cirdan can be..most helpful. We need to invent a version of his wine that doesn't leave quite such a hangover though... hmmm....
person nikkiling
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm... all tied up with no place to go... *chuckles* Mel could have some fun with this one, and Hal could be in for a treat!
person TopazKat
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* poor Haldir, he ain't going no where. And I am so glad that Orophin was able to help Miradel, even if only it was only a little bit. She seems a bit calmer now about the relationship her brother is in; but then again, I suppose it would be hard not to be by this point.
person TopazKat
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* sill Thranduil, of course it's a toy. Another fantastic chapter, I love how Elladan is getting more time with Rumil and also giving more time to Legolas and Gildor, it's very nice.
person nikkiling
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Elrond is so silly! Poking that poor elf... And so is Thranduil! I'm really getting a kick out of the whole backwards words thing.
So now I'm really curious, how big IS Elladan, especially compared to his father? Rumil may be in for a treat! *evil grin*
Great chapter! And perfect timing! It's been a long day at work, and I really needed a moment of fun, smutty escapism!
person Githoniel
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh oh... Haldir unleashed!!! Poor Orophin!!! Aw Rumil is sooooo cute. I just want to pinch his sweet little ass and cuddle him to death :)
But Elladan will do this job for me, won't he???
Wonderful chapter... again!
Hugs,
Githoniel
person Ertia
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haldir is gonna be one very ANGRY Marchwarden! *laughing hysterically* Yes, I knew Cirdan would have just the thing to help Thranduil and Elrond! He's been most... accomodating... of certain...requests from Celeborn and myself. Quite a handy fellow, that Cirdan. :D
person TopazKat
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* poor Thranduil... he'll be fine I'm sure, but it's just funny to see him all embarassed and such. I am also glad that Haldir was temporarily removed from killing anyone, that would be HIGHLY unpleasent. It's been great to see Erestor throw the warriors, that was just funny. And I'm also glad that Orophin is hiding with Erestor's sister, who hopefully won't freek out at the tree in her space.
person TopazKat
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how sweetly Rumil is being treated by Elladan, especially with the line about him being old enough because it would be so hard for Ell to wait. And I think that it's sweet for Orophin to also have his own crush, but sad that he isn't as well known as his brothers. Being a middle child sucks. As for Haldir, he needs to calm down. I mean come on, not even Thranduil reacted that badly... *stops thinks* bad choice of example... Elrond hasn't been reacting that badly! There, that's a good pick, he's been very calm, he just doesn't want to know. ^_^
person TopazKat
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... two wonderful chapters in such a short time, I must talk about both. I absolutely loved that even though Glrofindel went to the ladies to learn how to set up the atmosphere to his room you didn't describe it: that leaves it up to everyone's imagination as to how they might have wanted it. And the scene itself was so sweet and tender, simply beautiful.

As for the other characters, I loved the banter between Elrond and Thranduil as he was being punished. It certainly sounds as if Elrond is very well endowed. The part where Thranduil suggested talking to Cirdan about their situation was simply fantastic, especially Elrond's reaction. The elders are very amusing because they still see the younger ones in the light of "this is my child, I don't care if they're past their majority, I really do not want to know what they are doing in bed!"

And finally, I loved that it seemed as if everyone knew about the budding relationship between Elladan and Rumil other than Haldir, that must have been very tricky to keep such a thing secret from him.