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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person f.f.
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i've been gone from the erestor fandom i mean lotr fand, ofh who am kidding the erestor fandom, for about a year now. this is the 2nd story i've read so far and i must say i have missed out on a lot of fine writing! i don't know if i should be glad or sad though considering that
so many chaps were up when i found your story i could read all 38 chaps right away i beleive i'm quite happy, though how you end your chapters is cruel i,m not sure i'll survive the suspense to find out exactly what erestor does with glorfindel or how it was rumil didn't bleed even a little bit or how elronds and thrans relationship will develope or... well suffice to say i love your story and am extemely grateful you have not only written it but posted for the enjoyment of all erestor fans. thank you thank you thank you
person Macheil
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great job!! But what is an edain?
person TopazKat
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* wait... wait... Rumil didn't scream bloody murder? Not even a little? Odd...
As for Orophin's lessons, they seem to be going well as least, especially for Haldir.
And I can't wait to see what all Erestor will do to Glorfindel.
person TopazKat
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... I hope all goes well with the Lady Miradel. I think she will be all right though. *smiles* it will be good to see the questions that Erestor has for Glorfindel, but I don't think he's ticklish. How will he get him to answer?
person TopazKat
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, at least Orophin will get a visual demonstration to go with what little he knows originally. And as for Miradel and Harudel, I hope that being in each other's pain will help to heal their own.
person Ertia
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jeepers! On the balcony? Those elves! How embarrassing for Mel, and 'phin, actually! Eeek.

Are you still sick? Should we send Elladan with ... umm...healing supplies? Elladan good healer!
person Nikkiling
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh-hoo-hoo! Erestor's going to have a turn with this game! I wonder what he'll do to his poor mate. *grin*
And I hope you continue to get better! Flu-bugs are nasty things. *hugs*
person Ertia
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh!
Torture Glorfindel Time! My favorite show! What secrets will Erestors tickle tactics reveal about our Seneschal? Will he learn too much? Stay tuned!
Sorry. Got carried away there for a minute. You won't lose me, even if Rumil turns out to be fertile. After all, I stuck with you through tree -speak, didn't I? Still talking tree-speak occassionally for my amusment, even! :)
person Ertia
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. Rumil is *special*? Please please please do not say that you are going to turn this into an Mpreg? Please, even het would be happier than mpreg.
Eh. But I'm sure you know what you're doing. And as for Haldir, He'd better be careful! Rumil would NOT like it if he broke that part of Elladan! lol
person TopazKat
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are feeling better soon, illness can take a lot out of a person. I giggled a lot while reading this one. First, I love that Lady Miradel is really developing into an interesting character. Her fear of warriors is understandable, but her reaction-the fighting back or hurting them if necessary, is intriguing. I also really loved the interaction between Haldir and Elladan, of course now I am curious as to what is so special about sweet Rumil, but we'll find out soon I'm sure. The mere fact that Haldir is threatening Elladan with removal of his pieces was rather amusing, especially with the concluding "I think he broke me" and Elrond's "You'll be fine", it was just very funny.