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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person Macheil
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To be made love to so powerfully that it knocks you out? I like tht idea!! Me next, me, me ,me! And a blonde haired elf wouldn't break my heart!! Ha Ha
person Nikkiling
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still here! Still reading! Still love this story! LOL
Those two guards were great, although I did feel a bit sorry for the poor elves. And those elflings are just too cute! (in a bit of a hedonistic sort of way *grin*) I just LOVED their reaction to Thranduil in the last chapter. hehehe.
person maelleconstance
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, maybe when Erestor begins teaching Thorvel et Thoron, he can begin by teaching them the meaning of the saying: " Be careful of what you wish for, you might just get it!" But did that deserve THE BROW? O.K., I'm off to the shower now.
Maelle
person TopazKat
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um.. er... uh... yes, guarding the flets is much quieter and calmer than the boarders and nothing ever happens nope, nope!

*laughs* this was wonderful, and I also really liked the bit with the twins and Glorfindel at the end.
person TopazKat
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hopefully things will go more smoothly for Orophin and Lindir now. And the new twins can read withouth having been taught? Yikes, that is very advanced.
person maelleconstance
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No! Not the EYEBROW OF DOOM!!! Poor little twins!
(Maelle falls from chair laughing) I can just see it. And the constant questions? It reminds me of my 3 years old nephew who saw last week that there was renovations under way outside his home. He asked my sister what it was for and she told him that they were building his bedroom. So he ask why he was force to sleep outdoors! True story! Children; you've got to love them! Another great chapter, Dreamer.

Maelleconstance
person TopazKat
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* oh my, what did Rumil and Elladan tell their sons about Elrond's eyebrow to get that sort of reaction. And Thranduil, he's just like an enforcer. Very funny, but I hope that the little ones are all safe and healthy.
person Macheil
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm stuck! I am completely stuck on this fantastic story. I really am enjoing the different twist and turns of all the elves.Thanks for keeping this so entertaining
person TopazKat
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hee hee... Elrond's going to get a surprise when his grandsons open their mouths... Or maybe he knew that something like that could happen, who knows.
person TopazKat
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the reason you gave about the twins being so advanced, it makes so much sense. I am also greatly amused by the conversations that Elladan and Elrohir were having, and especially when, it's just amusing.