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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person MaelleConstance
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew it, I knew it (claps hands happily and singing) 'Fin's gonna have a baby! Oh I do love your stories DarkDreamer; they brighten up my day like nothing else can! I think he and Erestor are going to be wonderful parents. More story pretty please!
Maelle
person valaselva
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoaaa... i m not usually into mpregs but ur story has got me hooked right from the start !!
i must admit though, the spelling mistakes are quite disturbing as i m not a native speaker, it took a bit of thinking to understand what u actually meant.
So, everyone's getting pregnant one by one? who's next ? Thranduil/Elrond ? or Cirdan/Elrohir ?
Anyway, it's good that you r updating so quickly, see you at the next chapter!!
person Alexandra
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, it's funny and long and that is what i like. And Glorfindel is Pregnant so don't say this to anyone IT'S SECRET!!!!!
person Macheil
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh Oh! What's up with Fin? This story just keeps getting better and better!
person MaelleConstance
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, Ormeril wants to marry King Thranduil? Good choice, my friend; very good choice! Maybe he can hold his own against maddly protective father Haldir. But I wonder what Elrond will say about that? And Glorfindel is sick? As in "morning sickness" sick? (squealing of delight!) Could it be that the famous Balrog Slayer is with child?And if so, how will that compare with slaying the Balrog? Oh the possibilities! Please do not leave us in the dark for too long.
Maelle
person MaelleConstance
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ormeril, at 5, already has a dagger? And she has Haldir as a father? Ooohhh; I fear for her suitors when she's all grow up! Also, I love to see Glorfindel doing needle work; he is right; it requires concentration and patience. And very good eyes!
Maelle
person nikkiling
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww! That was just so sweet!!! Poor Hal. He'll just have to learn.
And I can just picture those young twins wandering around Imladris with brows lifted in a 'threatening' fashion. Too CUTE!
person TopazKat
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep, I was right, Haldir is going to be a very funny father about a daughter. But at least she'll have a good female influence around as well, considering Erestor's sister. I am still enjoying the story, but I understand that it must end eventually, otherwise a new adventure won't start.
person legenda
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haldir is alittel shoked or ? nO wonder in a familie with only ellons.
I think that Thranduil should stap dowen Elrond needs him in Imladris.
BUt still, to litte of Thranduil and Elrond.Please allitel more*puppyeys*
legenda
person khj
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So everyone has an elving.Must be a happy and family.
I was just thinking abaout an´pragent Elrond.POoor Thran.
*eveilgrin* Why not, but I thinkat theh beginning they shouldn't know.Thranduil should fing it out himself.
khj