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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person TopazKat
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chocolate covered bark... that is a new one. *thinks* well, some of the Native Americans used to boil willow bark in water for tea and that has the same chemical as asprin, so I suppose that in someway this makes sense... *thinks* maybe.
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Dark...this is going to be interesting! I feel badly for poor Erestor, since it seems Glorfindel is going to have a case of full-blown pregancy cravings! Bark and chocolate, indeed! *snorts*

And Thranduil! Being chased by none other than Haldir's daughter...egads! Elrond's wrinkles...*snorts again*

This was wonderful chapter! I can't wait to find out who Omeril sets her sights on next!

:D

Kath
person TICS
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snort* I forgot to sign in for that last review...didn't mean to leave it as "anon"!

:D

kath
person MaelleConstance
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now that was something! The great King Thranduil of Mirkwood having to hide from a little girl! (snorts) Talk about a fearless leader! And I am not so sure about Glorfindel's craving; it might be good in fiber but isn't it hard on the stomach? Maybe he should stick to chocolate covered bananas...
Maelle
person TICS
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! Findel is gonna be a Nana? That's awesome, Dark! Loved this chapter...and thanks for the Elrohir/Cirdan smut!!!

:D

Kath
person Tiryaroofshadow
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You got Glorfindel pregnant! The mighty Balrogslayer's belly will soon be swelling with life. So what's it gonna be ? A boy or a girl? Or maybe both, like say twins - Or maybe you could go for triplets, or quadruplets, or ... okay, I'm getting a little excited here. Hmm, I think maybe Elrond should be considering starting some kind of daycare in Imladris.
Oh and I kept waiting for the moment where Ormeril and the twins would be bursting into Elrohir and Cirdan's room, just at the most "opportune" moment off course. Lucky for them (Elrohir and Cirdan) that didn't happen. Although, it would have been funny to see Ormeril firing up a whole bunch of questions at the poor couple, while they were still ... um ... "attached" to each other.
Anyway, just wanted to say, I like your stories a lot, even though this is the first time I'm reviewing.
person TopazKat
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I guess what I meant when I said that I hoped Glorfindel wasn't pregnant was that I figured it would be harder on him and he's already had many upsets. I personally don't mind Mpregs because I find them rather funny and find that Glorfindel carrying Erestor's child to be very amusing as well as wonderful. I still like it very much and I love poor Erestor's reaction, I just hope he landed on something soft.
person Anon
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this thing ever gunna die?????? You sound like a nice lady and all, but geesh!
person Macheil
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is to good to be true! I think Fin and Erestor will make wonderful parents!! I must admit, you have picked my favorite Tolkein elves to write about. I think it would great to have them as parents. Erestors shyness and smarts,Fins great humor and patience. This child is going to be something else. Keep up the great writing, can't wait for the next installment. Great job!!
person TopazKat
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, poor Glorfindel, I just hope that he isn't pregnant as well, I would have thought that that might have shown itself before now. Oh well.