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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person Louise_oblique
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again very good, I admit I am looking forward to the new developments which will occur with Lord Glorduin's arrival, LOL! Cool! Oh and I am fine, just buried under Uni work. It's my third and final year *shudder* so much work to do. I am enjoying a great respite from work with each new chapter.
all the best
Louise_oblique
person Ertia
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew! All caught up!
Interesting turns this story has taken! And over 60 chapters! Who would have thought it back in the beginning?
person TICS
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, Dark! Fin's daddy? Oh, brother...what makes me think he's not going to be very happy with a pregnant ion? Is Erestor going to get to go "warrior" on his father-in-law's butt? And poor Orophin and Linder! All those elflings! I hope 'Phin gets even with Haldir for setting him up like that!

Hurry and update Dark!

:D

Kath
person MaelleConstance
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Gasps) Glorfindel's Adar! My Lord, the Valar really love that elf! First, he gets pregnant because he wished for a child, then he asks for his ada and lo and behold! Glorfindel must be a happy elf. I never saw that one coming. Kudos to you, Dreamer!
Maelle.
person Tiryaroofshadow
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops! Well Elrond and Thranduil should have locked their door, before engaging in 'not-worksafe'-activities. Let's hope Ormeril won't be asking her parents if they sometimes act the way the two elflords did. Although ... might make for some funny situations if she did.
Oh and Tordren doesn't yet seem to know he has become Ormeril's latest victim. Poor Tordren, Ormeril has set her sights on him, and since he's not bound yet...
person TopazKat
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Oh I love Haldir's daughter, she really has her sights set high, but I am curious as to why she is so fascinated with the healers. And I also love how you're showing the emotional changes that Glorfindel must be going through due to the pregnancy, they come out very well. I am also glad to have told you some information you didn't know. I know a lot of wierd trivia.
person Louise_oblique
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! LOL!!!! I am eargly looking forward to each chapter!

Louise_oblique
person nikkiling
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL Now that is an interesting form of pica! Tree bark indeed! What an odd craving! hehehe
And Ormeril is so cute! I loved her description of Elrond, and how matter of fact she seemed about the idea that she would have to be with Elrond as well. Too cute!
I wonder which poor elf they'll try to turn her attentions to now!
person Tiryaroofshadow
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! A hormonal, food-craving, pregnant Balrog-slayer. Gee, wouldn't want to get on his bad side. Poor Erestor, what did he get himself into. Oh wait, none of this is actually his fault, but hey, I'm pretty sure Glorfindel won't see it that way. Chocolate-covered bark, hmm, maybe this could become the latest Imladris fashion.

Ai and poor Thranduil, being chased by Ormeril. It seems he'd rather be chased by a pack of howling wargs, close on his heels. At least this is all happening in Imladris and he doesn't need to worry too much about his reputation back home. ...unless off course, if one of his sentries, inadvertently lets his guard slip.

Oh and Haldir made a very good recovery discussing Elrond's 'wisdom lines', with his daughter.
person Louise_oblique
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Tree bark!!! LOL! Hilarious! This fic just gets better and better, I admit I can't wait for more Glorfindel!

Best wishes
Louise_oblique