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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person sagewolf
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ormeril is so cute! LOL!

And Haldir is very patient... all that fast talking... I would have killed them all by now. LOL!
person TopazKat
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... another absolutely wonderful chapter with too many things to mention... I think the highlights were when Glorfindel punched out his father shortly followed by him then going to talk with him (I hope their walk is sucessful and healthy) and finally, Ormeril is simply too cute: and I really have to agree with her love interest that Haldir will simply have to come around.
person tfutcher
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love this story. What is going to happen on the walk with Glorfindel and his adar. Please update as soon as poss
person MaelleConstance
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah Tordren will definetly need the ScratchThorn; knowing Haldir like we do. I really like little Ormeril, she is just marvelous; like all of your original characters. And Fin's father deserved that punch! I just hope that he can mends things with his ion. Sorry to hear about the root canal and how weird is that? I am scheduled for two of those darn things! My appointment is only in 2 weeks which gives me all this time to get scared over the whole thing. But I had an idea: maybe I can learn to do THE BROW so that when I am in the dentist's chair with a thousand instruments in my mouth, I can do THE BROW to scare the dentist away! I am gonna start practicing right now!
Hugs and kisses to make the pain go away,
Maelle.
person TICS
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, Dark...I'd love to see a companion piece to the Fire Dance written about the Elven Daycare! It sounds adorable! And I'm almost feeling a bit sorry for Glorduin...although hearing his confession about not knowing how to relate to his son shows that there is hope for him. Great update - and I'm so sorry about your tooth! Feel better and update soon!

:D

Kath
person sagewolf
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok... it took me three days, but I got caught up and read the whole thing. And now I am DYING for more!!!!!!!! This just gets better and better with every chapter! *falls to floor going through instant withdrawl* Pay no mind! I'm patient... honestly, I am!
person Louise_oblique
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Everyone's heads spun toward the door when they heard a low protective growl....
Glorfindel stood tall in the archway with his arms crossed and eyes narrowed "He said, he is my mate""

Cool! I really am quite curious about this lord now, this fic just gets better and better as it developes. well done. much more fun to read than theorizing about diaspora *groan.* admit the drugging sounds quite amusing, thank goodness for a scratch thorn!

huggs
Louise_oblique
person TopazKat
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh boy... spit fire is right. I think Glorfindel's father just met his match in many people. I am interested to see how this will work out, as Glorfindel has done a great deal in his life and in his second life, more than his father certainly.
person MaelleConstance
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh la la; Glorfindel's ada is in for some surprises! But I doubt that the Valar would had send him to do harm to Fin. I think there is a hidden significance to his coming to Imladris. Besides, Erestor would not let anything happen to his mate now, would he? Appereances are deceiving and besides, didn't you say in the beginning of this story that Erestor has a nice collection of daggers? He might be tempted to use them. As for a new story from old me, I am working on it. In fact, I am working on three at the same time. Those plot bunnies are relentless! And do not worry my friend: as long as you are writing, I am reading!
Your number one fan,
Maelle.
person TopazKat
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eek... this could prove to be a very bad thing, or a very good thing that will lead to lots of healing... *crosses fingers for the second possibility*