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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person MaelleConstance
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh nice! I just love angry Erestor! He gets so pushy! And having the twins dressed exactly alike when they are out to kill? Very nice touch, my friend, very nice indeed! I am liking Glorduin more and more! He his eager to learn and that is a good sign! And I do not want this story to end! Ever! I love it so much!
Hugs,
Maelle.
person animebishieluver
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... wow... ... ... ... even though I was kind of expecting it... ... ... ... ... ... it was still somewhat of a shock! torture... nice... but if I know you, there's some tragic story of a lost love that Glorfindel healed him of which is why he does not use his alternative talents now... if you do that, I must warn you, you will go under the catagory of "predictable author" in my mind. be careful, you and like 2 other authors are the only ones left who can surprise me, and one of them is J.K. Rowling, who is fast losing that spot. the other is also an internet author who hardly ever updates. you've ot ups on both of them there. as for the reviewing, *salutes*, anytime! update soon, bye!
person TopazKat
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I simply loved the image of Erestor grabbing each of the older twins by the ear and yelling at them, he knows them very well indeed, I'm surprised that their father hadn't figured out what they were going to be up to. As for Aglar, what an intriging part of him, considering that elves are usually presented as being unable to perform such acts or else they will become evil (at least that is how I thought it was supposed to be). But I can't wait to see how this plays out.
person TopazKat
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, so much to review on! I'm sorry I dind't review sooner, but I must say that I am very pleased with how Glorfindel's father is making out (as the case may be). I am also very worried about this new Adan, because I know as soon as he is better, Erestor is going to find him and likely hurt him a good deal. I also hope that Glorfindel will be all right and that the new twins aren't in trouble, since they didn't mean to make him sick.
person Sage Wolf
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo! Dang! I can't wait for the next chapter! This is grabbing me more and more!
person MaelleConstance
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I go away 24 hours and when I come back I find two chapters! I think I have to stop sleeping if I do not want to miss anything! Poor Elladan, I hope he will not be traumatize by what he saw. It was a good thing that he saw it, thought; because if not, Fin would have probably kill his rabbit without meaning to. Death by sex; that is not a bad way to go (if it is not force upon you, of course). It amaze me how you are able to come with something new for this story; does it mean that it will never end *muwahmuwahmuwah**evil laughter* The Never Ending Story of DarkDreamer; written from the bottom of her heart for our reading pleasure!
Hugs,
Maelle.
person Sage Wolf
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I love the last paragraph! "Oh for the love of" ROTFLMAO!

And Finny. o_O LOL!

You are killing me. ;) In a good way, of course!
person nikkiling
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear god!! This should get interesting! LOL
(And I did post a review for the last chapter, but I can't recall what I said. Only something to the effect that I love what you've done with the issues around Glorfindel's father. Very, very interesing!)
person erviniae
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love all the sexing in this chapter! I cannot believe that Glor's dad is doing this-perhaps he has always had repressed feelings for males.
person Sage wolf
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw. His father is kinda cute now. I feel an urge to give him a squeeze!

And Haldir isn't killing him! I thought he'd at least poke his eye out with the scratch thorn!

I'm a sick and twisted individual, you'll have to ignore forgive me. ;)