rate_review Reviews

Thank god the twins are ok. I am not sure about what happened to Glorfindel

sorry i meant to say i guessed about glorfindel after we heard about the adan

The story was sort of entertaining at first, but eighty one chapters and no end in sight? I don't mean to be rude, but you really need to think about wrapping it up before too much longer.

Thank the Valar the twins are okay! I am proud of them for what they did; angry, but proud. Please do not have them punished too hard! They are too cute! And maybe Glorfindel can teach them to use their knives properly hehe...
Hugs,
Maelle.

perfect chapter ., but could you wrtite somthing of elo and thran again , there was nothing i fthem in the last 12 chapters

You are eventually going to tell us who this dude is, aren't you? LOL! You're killing me!

*laughs softly* I love the Vel and Thron, they have obviously inherited their father's tempers, skills, and committment to their families. It was a very bad idea on the part of the adan to use them as a tool to get to Glorfindel. I was not terribly surprised to hear Glorfindel's explanation of what happened nor how strong he was about the whole thing, we have seen several times now that he is a very strong elf. I do want to say that I hope that we readers won't get a real graphic description of what will happen to the Adan, since it might disrupt the flow of the story otherwise. The story is still really good.

Oh!!!!!!! The twins had better be okay!!! Can't wait for more!

*hugs*
Jana

Oooh evil cliffie, evil cliffie! I hope the twins are okay. But should I be worried about the adan? Well, I hope he is ok too for the sake of the twins. And because I want him tortured, TORTURED I say! And of course I am still liking and enjoying this story, silly you! What's not to love?
Hugs,
Maelle.

Oh no! What happened to the little twins? I hope everything is going to be all right. This newest piece of conflict that you added has really been interesting.