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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person MaelleConstance
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Singing voice* Fin and Restor have and ion! I am so happy! And Elrond said that he will be alright. He'd better not be mistaking! *glare at Elrond* What does he looks like: Glorfindel or Erestor? I want to know everything! Wonderful, wonderful chapter, my friend!
Hugs,
Maelle.
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
82 chapters is nowhere near enough for me. However, I was hoping that Aglar castrated the adan. Yeah, I know... I'm bloodthirsty. But in my defense, he deserved to be fixed so that he could never rape anyone ever again, even if it meant that he was made into a eunuch.

It was funny reading about the whining of the Slayer, in a way, but ouchies! A C-section without any anesthesia? Eeeee! Tordren should have been called for, with his scratch thorn. After all, it wasn't necessary for him to be awake to push.

Keep 'em coming, Dark. The more the better!

schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you know that I love this story and it will NOT end anytime soon! No it won't, now will it! You just keep feeding that muse of yours and we will keep on reading! Remember what I said, you are writing the story without breaking it up into sequels.

*big hugs*
your devoted fan, Jana
person Aglarien
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised at myself for wanting Aglar to give that damn Adan a lot of pain....hmmm....whoever thought I'd be so blood-thirsty. And Dark, my dear friend, please ignore Anon's request to end this story any time soon....If he/she doesn't like it, then he/she should just not read it! The rest of us are loving it!
*hugs and kitty kisses*
Agie
person nikkiling
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Finally caught up! And what a place to leave off! That image of Aglar there at the end, courtesan turned torturer... I love him! What a wonderful character! And Glorfindel.... poor elf. But I liked his excuse as to why he did not fade. A strong, stubborn elf indeed! And those two younglings are quite vicious! Granted, they were only trying to protect those they loved, but wow! Definately looking forwards to your next update!
person TopazKat
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that the twins are all right and that their fathers aren't too angry or anything, though their fear is reasonable. As for Algar, I am amused by the strength of his character and I can see the smile as well. It's fun to have such a strong character, he's kind of amusing as well as a little scary.
person MaelleConstance
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor little twins! They saw Glorfindel's pain and wanted to avenge him! I am sure that it will be a great comfort to him. But like everybody, he will be angry also. I just love those little rascals! I hope Aglar get this %?&*&? adan good!
Hugs,
Maelle.
person Ithilwen
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story !!! i love your erestor and elrohir !!!! <3333333
person sage wolf
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lose me?! Never! LOL! I've read 81 chapters, I'm not going to teeter off now. This is definetly the first time I've chosen to read a fic this long, so you're doing something right! LOL! *glomp attack*
person aoklopt
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter , what will agalar do ???
and please shlas i miss this couple so much thank you!!!!!!!!