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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gwee! I love it! And of course Fin wants his ion! Loved it!

*hugs*
Jana
person Ithilwen
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeaaaaaaaaaaaaals* (Did I squeal in my last review ?) Anyway, Torfindel is truly adorable !! Just like Dad and Daddy !!! <3333333 Our dear Captain Gwee must have been a cute Elfling. XD I'm sure he and da Rabbit will be great parents !! Please, do write more... *is shot* And that evil Man will never hurt Findel again !!! (Btw, seems Findel's Adar has some weird torture fetish or something, LOL !!)
person MaelleConstance
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gwee; I like Gwee too! Yet another great chapter. I really like the give-me-my-child Glorfindel! Erestor and him will make wonderful parents. I am kind of sad for Erestor's sister and her mate; but I guess life is not fair for them either. At least they have each other. And things look good for Aglar and Glorduin! Ahh yes, a wonderful chapter it was, dear friend!
Hugs,
Maelle.
person animebishieluver
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* aww, he sounds so cute! I like Gwee, they should call him that as a nickname! *cuddles Gwee* he's so cute... and Algar's right, if it was up to me, I would have stabbed and twisted a red hot knife into him until he died. but that's just me. update soon, bye!
person TopazKat
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must tell us what Torfindel means. I was so pleased to see that the little one is going to be all right, just small. The interaction between the parents and their son was so sweet. I also really loved the care that Glorduin showed Aglar after the session with the human; as we see now that his heart has moved aside his fears and is going to allow him to take care of his new love.
person Bulisen
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've read 83 chapters in two days (nights more like it:P) and I now have a horrible headache wich I can not thank you enough for, not really the headache more the reason behind the headace.

This is an lovly fic and I hope too se at least a 100 more chapters ok?

And please *puppy eyes* let Aglar and Glorfindels Arda stay together, don't let evil Nemo...eh I mean Namo force them apart! (You could always have Glor-something making Aglar up the duff, ehh *smiling sheepishly* pregnant:))

Thank you for my headache and all the fantastic "arse coupling"
Bulisen
person Bulisen
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh i forgot too say keep strong and that Anon should just go and try drowning him/herself in the toilet while flushing!

I love it and I'm by far a better "slasher" then him/her if they can't see how good this is!

/Mimmi
person Ithilwen
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bursts into tears* Poor Findel had his Elfling prematurely !!!! ;____________; He was so adorable being pregnant, though, the cheesecake addict. XD And Erestor is such a loving husband !!! <3333333 Aglar and Glorduin are so coooooooooool !!! And I love Mel, he cracks me up. And Lindir when he calls Phin "Tree". Great story, this one, I'm looking forward for more... Hope Findel and his baby will be okie... *pats him and gives him some cheesecake*
person sage wolf
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw! I bet the baby's cute! LOL!

Have a good holiday!
person animebishieluver
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh... if you need any help with the torture scene, I am more than happy to think up an appropriate punishment. the baby sounds cute, update soon, bye!