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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person Macheil
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love babies!! You are right, babies start off with their own personal language while slowly they learn ours. My three boys were the same way!! Thanks for making this story better and better!
person MaelleConstance
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! More spanking for me! And more Aglar and Glorduin! What a great New Year gift! Thank you so much, dear Dark! I think it will be interesting to see how Glorduin reacts to the arse coupling. Wonderful chapter!
Hugs and a Happy New Year!
Maelle.
person MaelleConstance
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I am so in love with Aglar and Glorduin right now! I just love the way you are handeling this pairing. I even think they deserved a sequel only for them! Maybe in it, we could learn more about Aglar's past life as a Shadow Stalker and how Glorduin ended up so misguided concerning relationship (including his misadventures with Findel's naneth!). I know you have given us good clues in precedent chapters but I find myself wanting MORE! Aglar must be a good person if little Gwee accepted him right away! How did he become an assassin? I know, I am getting needy right now but it is your fault for writing such great original characters!
Hugs,
Maelle.
person sage wolf
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think Erestor would have kicked him around the room if he settled on gwee. LOL! But I love your interp of it!
person sage wolf
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Cut the crap Aglar" That had me on the floor! This is an excellent chapter! Someone was in a silly mood while writing this, I can tell! LOL! *huggles*
person Daeomae
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was not quite as far behind as I had thought, Dark. I only needed to read the last two chapters. *smiles* But here is my review as promised. Gweeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! What a wonderful couple of chapters!! Obviously, I like the nickname and the fact that Erestor doesn't. Heheheh. I'm also glad that Glorduin still wants Aglar after seeing what he is capable of, cause geez, that was some rough stuff, but nothing the adan didn't deserve. *grins* Too bad we can't use that means of interrogation here at work. *wink* *Big Hugs sweetie*


*Mwah*
Dae
person TopazKat
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for giving the explanation on the new baby's name. As for this chapter, there were so many sweet scenes: Glorduin carrying Glorfindel to the healing wing, everyone calling Torfindel "Gwee" while it was driving Erestor nuts, and my favorite part with Glorduin taking care of Aglar, it was very sweet.
person Ithilwen
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay !!! Yet another lovely chapter !!! I love Gwee... err Torfindel. XD It's a very creative name, I didn't notice !! Pleaaaaase, write more !!! (Maybe some arse coupling, LOL!)
person nikkiling
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That moment when Glorduin picked up Glorfindel and Glorfindel told his father that he loved him... that was just too sweet!! And when Gwee (hehehe! I love it!) didn't cry when Aglar picked him up... just full of sweetness!
person animebishieluver
schedule December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWW... sweet! lol, we should have Glorfindel carried more often! I can just imagine his fac being as stormy as an elfing denied dessert! lmao! update soon, bye!