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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person sage wolf
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And people ask me why I don't have any kids! *snort* I'd probably smother my kid, too! But now I wonder if Glorfindel is going to try that little trick, and if he does, how far can Erestor shove his foot up his ass? LOL!
person Ithilwen
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, alright, I'll leave Gwee alone if Dreamer gives us some Glor/Eres smut !! j/k Nice chappie !!! Poor Glorfy. *pats him* He needs more help from Erestor. XD
person Daeomae
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A pillow???? *gigglesnort* That's funny in a warped sort of way. Great chapter Dark!! Glad to see Glorduin and Aglar basking in their newfound love. *blissful sigh*

*Mwah*
Dae
person MaelleConstance
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Aglar and Glorduin have bonded! I am soooo happy for them. But poor Glorduin who was all caught up in a loveless marriage; with a baby without knowing how to take care of him. No wonder Glorfindel was crying as a child! And about me looking to be spanked... well I am always looking to be spanked! But maybe I will not create the group if you promise that "The Fire Dance" will never end...:-)
Hugs,
Maelle.
person sage wolf
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's odd... I found this chapter rather soothing somehow. I don't know why, but I feel all warm now. Nicely done!
person animebishieluver
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh... you're evil... you just had to leave off right there, didn't you?! evil, evil, monkey-serving person! I bet you come with the monkeys when they steal my cheese! evil, evil! update soon, bye!
person Ithilwen
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Indeed Glorfindel has things to discuss with his Rabbit !! I wonder what he'll think of this discovery, LOL !!! And Rondy better well soon, Thran misses him. ;____; Gwee !! I want my own Gwee !!
person MaelleConstance
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am still very much in love with Aglar and Glorduin. It is such a wonderful thing to watch things evolve between the two of them. Glorduin has come so far and yet he still has a lot to learn. I am telling you, Dark; you will have to write a fic only for those two! If I have to, I will create a group at Yahoo especially for them. And one for Melpomaen too because I have not found any yet about him. But that is another story. Good job, once again!
Hugs,
Maelle.
person TopazKat
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Glorfindel, at least he knows that what he's feeling is fairly normal. I loved the dialogue during that small discussion, it was so cute and funny. As for Glorduin and Aglar, I am relieved to see how well they are healing each other, it's wonderful.
person Daeomae
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm reviewing for the last three chapters here Dark, so bear with me. *grins* Ooooh, breaking the bed during sex...bad. Having it leave you in something akin to a coma...very bad. Experiencing feeding difficulties like Glorfindel...odd but not unheard of. Falling in love with a courtesan/shadow stalker...wonderful!! Having that love be your first male lover after being afraid of such a relationship for so long...beautiful! Thran being threatened with a scratch-thorn being shoved up his arse...hilarious!! *winks* All in all, a terrific last few chapters, sweetie!! *hugs* Sorry, it took so long for me to R&R them. *blushes*

*Mwah*
Dae