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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person TopazKat
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* now that is one hell of an alarm clock. I love that Glorfindel is finally able to break away from his son a little bit to have some time with his mate, but their scene earlier was very amusing what with Glrofindel rattling off things that Erestor simply uses.
person Nightcloud
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You do realize that only 12 chapters to go and you'll make a hundred? hinthinthint! This has been such a fun ride, it's like wine or brandy or anything else that's aged and wicked and wonderful. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise.
person MaelleConstance
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that is one heck of a way to wake up somebody! I wonder why Thran hadn't think of this before. Perhaps he was too busy building his dongeon. And I wonder if little Gwee will behave himself with Orophin and Lindir. He is, after all, the reincarnation of a balrog ;-) Great update, sweetie!
Hugs,
Maelle.
person animebishieluver
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*shakes head slowly and disbelievingly* leave it to thranduil to think of waking somebody up with sex... ooh... this song... banging on your front door!... no! must resist!... eviiiiiillll!... no backstreet boys!... ooh, hear we go!... my hump! my hump my hump my hump!... so don't pull my hand boy, you ain't my man boy, I'm just tryn'a dance boy, and move my hump!... okay, enough of that, update soon, great chapter, bye!
person Lena
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yummy glorfindel...hmm what oh yes, great chappy i love how you woke elrond up i was hopeing you would do something like that and yay cause you did!!!
person TopazKat
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I prefer Erestor's way of quieting the baby rather than Glorduin's. At least with Erestor's way, he gets to be involved and the baby isn't at risk of being smothered. I have to admit, I do wonder now what it is Thranduil's wife refered to her children as, it sounds amusing.
person Anon
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your welcome, and yes im alright trying to get into college... and was witness to some things that happened with my fathers businees partner got thrown into the thing had to move with parents cause parents couldnt live in texas anymore cause of the lawsuit so im a 19 year old living with her parents forced to move with them so they will pay for college and it has made my life a living hell but im alright very homesick for texas missing my buddies there but reading your stuff makes me feel better cause i get a good laugh and a great story to read that has in my opinion well developed charactors whether you thought about it or not it just how you made the characters seem slightly more real...anyways love the chappies! specialy how dedicated thranduil is to elrond and how glorfindel calls torfindel...gwee!!! a balrog and beats up haldir and tree...good times, i love how you mention all the charactors and what they are doing so you dont sit wondering what the charactors are doing in one chapter even if they are not a big part of it they are still there and you know they havent gone away, that would be depressing
Love ya! and your stories!
person Lena
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! totally forgot to put my name there that me Lena at the bottom...or top i dunno where it is but you will know 0_o;
person Bulisen
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh shivering in delight here:)
You are just soo (/#%&"! good!

And you know what I meant with nippelplay! I want E/G nippelplay ok? Pweeeese? *pouting*

And hey I wasn't complaining about your updates, you're really fast in updating! I was complaining about me and aff.net me for being stupid not remebering your name and aff.net should really have an alertsystem so you get a e-mail when there is a new chapter and categories when searching!

But still you are just great and wonderful and I love you're stories (trying too catch up with the other ones too) but could you please make Aglar into a real person so I may buy him from you? He is just so... I don't know...sexy...wonderful...cute;)...the list goes on...:P

Ohh and when is you're birthday? I wanna try doing some fanart for your fics so pweeeeese tell me and pweeeeese I would love if you could send descriptions of your OCs too my mail pweeeeese, pretty pweeeese?
If I find you're mail I will sent you one of my works, not fanart though as I'm new at that:)


/Mimmi
person oli
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe!...Poor poor Glorfindel...reminds me of when mine were babies..ARGH!
So... who is the next to get into trouble or become pregnant? Oops! better stop, I'm starting to sound like the old mother I am...keep the excellent writings coming!...

Oli..(Wendie)