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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person Macheil
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this wonderful chapter. I understand Erestor's empty nest feelings. My youngest will be moving out next month. He's 20. Thanks again!!
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read 204 - I missed reading this story so much! you have no idea - it was like I was having withdrawal symptoms :D

Hey, do you think Ry would appreciate it if I inked ~Garn O Logan~ on him LOL!

Off to read 205 now, so happy - 2 chapters in one day! yay!
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Elrond - Thran must really be starting to worry about him now. And Mandos, poor Mandos and his crush on Glorfindle - is Mandos going to get a new partner too? like Algar has?

Loved the chapter - more please *pouts* *lip wibble*
person HMica
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh *does happy new chapter dance* yeah!

I loved that poor Elrond is now worrying Thran that he might be seeing things, but I'm also glad that they got the rocks out, because, as Glorfindel pointed out while trying to play Erestor (silly idea on his part), the ceiling could have caved in. And the idea that Legolas and Gildor are still up to mischief is great, and very silly.
person asydnes
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DARK!!!! I've finally managed to catch up with this story!!! Whoot!!! *giggles* I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading all 12 chapters that I was behind on in one fell swoop! ;) I laughed through most of it, especially with talk of Elrond's tunic dress, lol. But the parts about what Glorduin's father did to him with the faded elf and, of course, Tordren's death (even though you'd talked to me about it just before you wrote it) made me cry. *sniffles* Great job, my friend!!! *hugs*

*Mwah*
Dae
person HMica
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*hugs* I'm sorry to hear about the RL heck that's been going on, I hope that things clear up soon. Now, onto my review. I loved the reactions in this chapter, the characters, as always, were wonderful to hear from. I enjoyed how even as she was dealing with grief and trauma, Omeriel really stood on her own, as she always has in the past, she stayed true to herself. And I loved that Thoniel pounced on his mate, very funny and sensual.
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is it me or is it getting harder and harder to actually use aff.net?

Anyway - I really loved this chapter - it made me cry twice! will she marry her hero now? the guy that jumped through the window? or will she be in mourning over the loss of her healer-husband?

p.s. I honoured that you used the name :D
person HHS
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Warrior Princess huh?Too bad that her husband died.
person HMica
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... I really don't know what else to say... It was just so surprising to lose Torden that way, I really liked him. At least both Ormeriel and her daughter are all right. On a writing note, I am glad that you did not try to write the passing itself, I think in many ways it's more powerful to read it as those finding out as well. I liked that you also were still able to have a few snarky/funny lines from different characters in this, even with all of the stressful and sad elements.
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ormeril! I hope she'll be okay and I'm sure Haldir will be mad with her husband!

and I love the beginning where Thely jumps on Glorfindels bed - thats priceless!