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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person animebishieluver
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh, this could be fun! Glorfindel is EVIL! WOOT! update soon,can't wait, bye! ^_~
person HHS
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I haven't read this for a very,very,very long time.
person TopazKat
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is turning out to be very interesting. I love how Gwee's favorite game is to play "spy". I also thought it was very sweet to see that Mandos wanted to play as well and I am glad that there is nothing in Gwee's immediate future that would require him to go to the Halls soon.
person MaelleConstance
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah-ha! So it was Mandos! I should have remembered that Gwee kind of liked him earlier. And perhaps Mandos needs a friend too! Although I think that all-black eyes are a bit creepy. I wonder what those two are up to...Great update hon! Oh and about Haldir...can Melpomaen come too? We wouldn't want to leave him alone, the poor dear now would we?*snorts*
Hugs,
Maelle.
person animebishieluver
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooh... I smell a sex scene!!!! update soon, and keep in mind that there's more than one one of us itching for a good spanking!
person asydnes
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is for Chapters 93 and 94, Dark dear! As promised! I love the way that Ron and Vel have taken Gwee under their wing to teach him about his father's past. I also love the way that Namo/Mandos (cause I just know that elfling is him) has taken the form of a child to give Gwee a friend. That's sooo sweet! Eagerly awaiting more, and hope the computer cooperates for you hon!! ((hugs))

*Mwah*
Dae
person angelsfyre1
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HA!!!B I was right it was Mandos! What a great chapter.LOL I could just see their eyes at the table when they realize who Gwee's friend IS!! ROFL nothing like having to come to terms with your kid playing with one of the Valar! I was so happy to see you had updated!! Now I am greedy I want MORE LOL so update as soon as you can please! Thank You for brightening my day!!
person oli
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH ER!!!
person TopazKat
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the intereaction between the boys and also between Gwee and his fathers in this chapter, it was very sweet and loving. And I feel very foolish for asking this about Eruion, but I am sure there is something special with such a character that I am just not getting because I have only read the Lord of the Rings Trilogy itself, so I hope you are willing to explain who he is. Great chapter again.
person Bulisen
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh Gwee needs a friend yes he does!!! And those bullies need some smacking around, okey mmaybe not, I know they may suffer more at home than Gwee does at school but they still need a good hug:D and a slap or two:P
/Mimmi