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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person khg
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh you are on again!!!!!!1*happy*
The story is perfect , as always , but Thran an d Elo are still without an elfing. Just the thinking. Elrond with child...... poor Thran.
get on with the chapters......
bby khg
person el
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i found you again. the new chapters are wonderful , but what is with the dress now? did elrond try it on or not?
person TopazKat
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hee... Omeril certainly knows what she wants, why on Earth would her father be so nervous. ^_^ As for Mandos... hmm... he must have plotted this meeting between sweet Gwee and the Avari, but for what purpose remains to be seen. I can't wait.
person TopazKat
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... I step away from my computer for the weekend and come back to so many wonderful new chapters. What can I say, there is simply too much. I enjoy every word written, this is such a wonderful story, and still going strong. I love Glorfindel's new little sister and I do hope that Erestor doesn't mind her litter too much under his desk. As for little Gwee, he is growing up marvelously and I love how you have followed the children after the initial story was brought to a close.
person Macheil
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so much fun to read! Go Gwee!!
person TopazKat
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh goody! Even more chapters! I love the new twist with Thranduil teaching sex-ed, it's wonderful to see him so caring and straightfoward on the subject. I am also glad to see how concerned he was with Omeril and wanting to make sure that she got into the class. I hope that Omeril's chat with Erestor's sister will not frighten her further, probably not since Miradel has been able to move on as well.
person TopazKat
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... I do love Mandos' ideas. Very clever to give all of the parents a break from their children. And I am curious to see what little Torfindel will learn of his father and his grandfather as well.
person Tenar10r
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHEE!!! I am very glad to see this story back with an update. :)
person Macheil
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so very happy you are continuing your wonderful story( giggles,giggles all around!! ) ! Thanks for the cliff hanger. Can't wait for the next installment.
person Ertia
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dreamer!!!!!!!!! *sob* You came HOME!!!!! *sprawls on the floor and wraps both arms around your knees* NEVER leave us again! *sob...sniffle*
Uh, can you tell I'm happy to see you?