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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person Macheil
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!! I love Erestor's fire. Another little ellon( sorry, but I was really hoping for an elleth ). This story is just getting better and better,keep up the great writing!!
person Melanie
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
After faithfully reading all 158 chapters - I must let you know I adore Fire Dance! I love that you update quickly and regularly. I don't know how you do it and keep up the quality of the writing. I check for new chapter each morning before going to work and it never fails to cheer me up. I must add your wandering elf story was also delicious!!! ~ Mel
person TopazKat
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, there's nothing to be worried about at all, Erestor is just giving birth to their second child without help from any healer. Perfectly safe indeed. I can't wait for the nex chapter.
person Macheil
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
At last an elfling!! Oh no, a cliffhanger! You evil thing you!! ( laughs )
person TopazKat
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh... I think I know where this is going... Orome is going to take Erestor to the place where he, Miradel and Lindir were harmed in order to heal, right?
person oli
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY!!!... you caught up at last!.. *snigger*

Hope all is ok my friend

Squishy hugs

oli...xxx
person TopazKat
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah... the dress finally comes into play. Hee, amusing. As for the rest, I have to agree with Elrond on some level, it must be very overwhelming to have such lordly creatures making themselves at home into your place of residence.
person TopazKat
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, even more valar popping in from everywhere. I am sorry that poor Erestor seems to be having a somewhat harder transition, but I hope he will feel better soon. His pregnancy is going after him a different way than Glorfindel's did him.
person el
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice new chapter. poor lindir, but now he has his tree...... the part withn tran hand is son in law was good too..... so where is the next chapter and where is the dress?????????
person Macheil
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have an amazing way of making this story more and more interesting! Erestor pregnant!! This is going to be sooo good. Thanks for all the updates. I can't wait to get home from work and check them out. My family knows to leave me alone for a half hour after I get home. It's great!!