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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person Macheil
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are taking us on a whole new adventure! I love your imagination with this story. Please, please keep up the great writing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person TopazKat
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... is it possible at all that Glorion may be already assigning sounds to certain people? He seems to recognize Taulkas. That would be interesting.
person TopazKat
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, both of Glorfindel and Erestor's children are such talkers, but I'm glad that Poor little Glorion is able to understand that certain words are not to be said. And it is just very cute that Torfindel is trying to take care of his little brother. I just hope that Taurcalad and Thoniel will be able to work things out between them.
person nightbreeze
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
envinyatar "he-healer" (Aragorn's title), so feminine Envinyatare
person Nessa Ar-Fieneil
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why do to the Valar keep bring the Avari that strung up the healer to Imladris?
person Blushing
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Did you know that all those word you gave the elflings have meaning in swedish?

Nu-Now
En-One
Na-slang for no
Gul-yellow
Minno-a old spelling but still means to remeber

I find this very funny and keep trying to make sentences:P

Oh and it's still disgustingly great as you know:P
person TopazKat
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hee... Glorion be a smart baby, not even three days old and he can say "under".
person Blushing
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, sorry I haven't reviewed before

You know this is disgustingly good don't you?
person Macheil
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a twist, that was not expected!! Thanks for the two quick updates. Keep up the great writing!!
person TopazKat
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! The older brother will be able to check on his younger brother at last. That is a nice thing.