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for The Fire Dance

by DurOltha

person Blushing
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm actually growling myself I ALWAYS press the "Add Chapter To Story" button on mistake before I press the Review button, it's getting very annoying!

I love little Anna's thoughts, he is so cute!

And well I hope Glorion decides to become a dancer or something! I love dancers, more dancing and more slash too me, uhm I mean us....

person Macheil
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was 17 when I first met my husband. Never had a boyfriend. I was clocking out at work when this scruffy guy said to me ,"Ooh, you do that so well, scared me to pieces. But 3 weeks later we went out on our first date, and we have been inseperable for the last 25 years. Corny but true! Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next!!
person TopazKat
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that was a very smart idea actually. Good for you Glorfindel. And I love the little word teasing that is following Little Glorion "Bababa black speach".
person TopazKat
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Taurcalad tried to give him a pet, that's sweet. Kind of a shame that it startled him so, really; porcupines are nice creatures. A wonderful chapter as always.
person Macheil
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Isn't it amazing how we can fall for the same person who scares us. The first time I met my husband, he terrified me. Now 25 years later.......... Can't wait for the next chapter!!
person Blushing
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A superduper long chapter *does happy dance* and lots of hissing *takes extra turn and makes nerdy attempt at a jump* this was so good, more hissing and growling and yay for Taurcalad more purring too!

If I haven't told you I love this then I'll do so now I F#CKING LOVE THIS STORY!!!

person Blushing
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh and I forgot, poor that porcupine to have to suffer loosing all it's quills, I hope it gets better treatment in the future!
person Blushing
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh now I'm dissapointed! No hissing or real growling?! I don't think I like you anymore!:P

Who am I trying to fool ofcourse I like you and I love this story! But more hissing is really needed!
person Blushing
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like the new one, (Taurcalad?) and the hissing and growling, I agree with him it's a turn on!:P
person Blushing
schedule July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh that's so sweet! Hope gets one of his own soon enough though:)