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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT'S NOT FAIR!!!!!!EVIL CLIFFIE!!!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAGHHHHHH!
You meanie! Get back here! Don't leave us like this!
I begin to think you enjoy torturing your readers....
You meanie! Get back here! Don't leave us like this!
I begin to think you enjoy torturing your readers....
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RE: Beta
Heck yeah, I'll be your beta. I think you've done an awsome job already, but I can't say no to a first glance at your story. Email me anytime at susanthebeta@yahoo.com, and I will get back to you as soon as possible.
Heck yeah, I'll be your beta. I think you've done an awsome job already, but I can't say no to a first glance at your story. Email me anytime at susanthebeta@yahoo.com, and I will get back to you as soon as possible.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
@ all: thanks for the review
@ susan: thanks so much for the input. well yes, why do you think elrond takes legolas to the bathroom each morning. i refrain(ed) from going into detail there. but you are right on the idea with the sores. i will think about how and where to mention it in the story and also in the already written chapters. i am looking for a beta-reader, interested?
i will write as soon as i find time. at the moment i am on vacationn, staying with a friend.
@ susan: thanks so much for the input. well yes, why do you think elrond takes legolas to the bathroom each morning. i refrain(ed) from going into detail there. but you are right on the idea with the sores. i will think about how and where to mention it in the story and also in the already written chapters. i am looking for a beta-reader, interested?
i will write as soon as i find time. at the moment i am on vacationn, staying with a friend.
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story. It is amazing that something so sick and twisted could appeal to anyone. The total control that Elrond has over Leggy, I think, is where the true interest lays. Do more!! :) But wouldn't Legolas have bed sores, aches from having his arms tied above his head, sores from having his wrists and ankles tied? Has he been able to go, you know what I mean?
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, this story was good. Please, keep going. Don't worry about any language errors; the mistakes you've made are minor and do not distract from the story. Don't keep us waiting for the next chapter.
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such beautiful, slow tormant on the body and the mind... I really love the fic! You do a good job with the emotions of Legolas. I just can't wait to see what you will come up with next!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good storyline... Please continue...
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Elrond's only having a power-trip right?He's not really evil?
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo...I must say that I am loveing this story! More soon please...
~DarkDreamer
~DarkDreamer