rate_review Reviews

That's one of the best EW/OB stories I've *EVER* read (and I've read quite a few..). LOVED the way you've written the two of them, the characterisations are great and the conversations and actions just as good!
It was just the right amount of "fluff" and not too girly (as slash-fics tend to be..).

Please do write more! I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter(s hopefully?) ;-)

I agree the story is very hot! You did a great job for your first story it really makes me look forward to the next chapter..please post soon.

Great writing! Well done. Makes me think i ought to try as well, but it's getting the courage up to publish - you took that step and it's brilliant. Thank you for sharing. Can't wait for the next chapter ..... please post it soon :-)

wow! that was hot. more please. :)