rate_review Reviews

Wow! That was so graphic, erotic and sensual. If the next chapter's half as good...well you'd have to publish it. So long as Elijah and Orlando okay it first i guess. But I have had the biggest crush on Elijah lattely so this story really made me...dare i say it...hard and horny!!! Thanks for a great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!

uhn. HOT.

Please update soon! I love this fic and can't wait to see what happens next!

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That was hot.

Tease. You just had to stop there didn't you. Your middle name must be evil.

Loved the 3rd chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

again Please, Please Please Please Please write more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! with lots of cream and sugar

love the way Lij reacts to Orlando's confesion of love.

Please write more soon. Please, Please, Please, Please!!!!!!!! With cream and sugar.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay! *claps hands in glee* Another chapter and it's brilliantly written yet again. :-D

Keep up this excellent work ......... looking forward to some Orlijah bedroom antics!

Of the two chapters you've written, I think the first is so far the best. There was a bit too much *girly* fluff in the second (fluff is good, as long as the guys don't behave like girls..) The way I see this, it's a bit too serious to be jumping in a couch for and it's rarely a good idea to go rough on someone right after you've admited you're in love with them, but that might just be me. Think of how it'd be written if it was a f/m fic. Things would probably be a bit more..ehm..slow? The way I read it now, it was going a bit fast, like it was a goal to finish the chapter ASAP. I dunno..Just my two cents.

I don't know what you think, but I've got an impression (not specificaly from you) that whenever girls write slash-fictions, they for some reason assume that since the guys are gay, they must be so much different from straight guys when it comes to stuff like this. I've still got left to meet a gay guy who is less cautios about love and relationships than a straight, just because he's gay. Am I making any kind of sense?

whew! is it getting hot in here or what. that was a great chapter. can't wait til the next one . :)