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for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

by MPB

person cowsgirl
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, let the courting begin!!!!!! love this story and liked how you brought about the truth and the punishment of his brother, shame on him!! Now, that the sentence is not as harsh and there is some chance he will pay for his crimes, lets get to the courting! Update soon.
person Ashley
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww wow! What a great story!! Bah it made me cry, poor Elrohir and Legolas... I can't wait to read more, hopefully happy?? I like happy :) such an awesome story...
person sugarplum
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a chapter! All I can say is don't stop!!!!! please continue soon.
person Sesshyangel
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Where to begin as to how this chapter has left me feeling? Happy? Delighted? Squishy and warm? LOL. All those and more. Love that Galvereth is finally getting what he soo longed for. Safe to say, this chapter has left me feeling very pleased. A little break in the midst of all that angst, and a ray of light leading into a happier tomorrow. Now is that last sentence a positive hint or a sort of “I spoke too soon and now its coming back to bite me” sort of comment/thought to make?
About that review a few chapters back, about the virgin thing. I was speaking in the sense that he had never been taken by anyone before. That is still the case isn’t it?


Hmm...I'm terrible. I meant to paste that onto here days ago, but I forgot. Glad you enjoyed your vacation! I've got weeks before school lets out, and it'll get worse before it gets better. ;_;
person Shanna
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Eresse. Wonderful, like always...
person Daphne
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just recently found this site. What can I say, I'm a late bloomer. I have been enjoying the Queer as Folk fandom, and also writing in it. I must say that when I found your story, I just couldn't stop reading. It is now midnight and sleep is finally overtaking me, but I have at last finished what you have written so far in this story. Your style is wonderful and such a pleasure to read. I love your use of vocabulary and history: both of which are passions of mine. I will be impatiently waiting for more!
Later!!
person Jayn
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They're back together!!! I'm so happy for them, but what other hardships shall they face? or will they finally meet their destiny together? {:EASE update soon!!!
person HHS
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah happiness!It's the way it should be between Elrohir/Legolas.
person Gingitsune
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you!!!! Yes! They have reconciled! Yes!!! *runs around cheering* I'm glad that the misunderstanding regarding Legolas's faithfulness had been cleared up. I really do not like to see them suffering needlessly. I still think that it's so sweet of Elrohir to ask t court Legolas. I really like the idea of them discovering each other again. Another great chapter from you again. Okok, I'm off to re-read the chapter again! *grins*
person Daeomae
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Eresse, that was so incredibly beautiful!! I found myself reading the majority of it with tears streaming down my face. *sniffle* I'm so relieved that they are willing to try again, and that Legolas realized Elrohir's need to begin again nearly from the start. He certainly is beginning to mature mentally and emotionally, making me feel much better for Elrohir's future. The Elf-Knight can now enter the relationship anew with Legolas without having to face another serious fall from an unfairly high pedestal. *blissful sigh* I'm also glad to see Galvareth and Elladan moving things forward finally. They both deserve happiness as well with each other.

*Mwah*
Dae