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for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

by MPB

person Jayn
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! I love the cabin idea. It was lovely. I could just imagine it and I wish something of the sort would happen for me. *Sigh* They're so cute! I cannot wait until the binding ceremony. I know I haven't 'waited' as long as they have but I am an impatient mortal. Lol. PLEASE update soon!!
person Daeomae
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, I'm so very happy that Elrohir has truly put aside his fears and once again embraced Legolas wholeheartedly. The Silvan cabin was a magnificent idea for a private retreat. It really showed the care and respect that the Elf-Knight has for Legolas' lineage and traditions. This was an incredible chapter Eresse!! Marvelous job!!

I'm looking forward to the reaction of Thranduil as well as those of the Last Homely House when they are told of the wedding. *bounces eagerly*

*Mwah*
Dae
person Yanic
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! yesyesyesyesyes!!!! They're back together again and everything is good. They've made their bed (literally!) and now I'm waiting for them to lie in it! Yes, sex please! Well done thanks for the update hopefully my blabbering wasn't too painful to read!
person HHS
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.I do hope that Elladan does say those words.
person Shanna
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Eresse. Al fin despues de tanto tiempo Galvreth y Elladan han conseguido amarse. Es muy romántico como Elrohir está cortejando a Legolas y asi aprenden a conocerse ambos... Me ha gustado mucho el capitulo como siempre y estoy deseando leer más. Un saludo.
person Daeomae
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that Elladan and Galvareth have finally consummated their relationship. It shows a great deal of respect and care for Elladan to finally have approached Galvareth in that way. *smile* I'm also intrigued to see what an impatient Legolas manages to come up with before they leave in the morning. *wink*

As for the Baklava, mmm mmm!! It's one of my favorites! *goes to get some chocolate drizzled baklava from the kitchen now*

*Giggles*


*Mwah*
Dae
person Yanic
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well at least Galvreth and Elladan are "gettin' some," lol although in all honesty I rather like this slower courtship and how the pair are learning more about each other. And the little bit about the pair cooking together- too cute! It's such a wonderful thing to do with someone you love, working together to create something. I loved that, and all the little things Elrohir does for Legolas- like bringing him food. Wonderful chapter as always, can't wait to read more.
person Blaise
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well it certainly seems as if Elladan and Galvreth are making up for lost time...how did Galvreth ever manage to ride home the next day? I would say that there looks to be a race to the altar or a double wedding perhaps but I think both Dan and Galvreth learned from Roh and Las about rushing things. Though they have taken quite a while before being intimate and have been quite cautious, I think, and it appears they agree, there still needs to be a long courtship there. I am so very pleased by the way Roh and Las' relationship has turned. Legolas especially seems to have a much more mature understanding of relationships at this time but I can still understand his want to move forward. The dream he held for most of his life is right before him, after he thought it had been lost...it is only natural for him to want to grab it with both hands and hold tight. That silver ring would definitely give Legolas , and Elrohir, reassurance. I don't think either can hold out much longer without giving in to deeper physical intimacy and more commitment; at least I'm hoping not!
person SesshyA
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL. This too has left me giddy. Forget about sleep now!
Glad you also managed to squeeze in some Leg/Ro there! As much as I love Galverth, I don't know what'd I do w/o Ro and Las. Just a question, though. You've breached the 20th chp. You normally don't go much farther than that. How many chapters are left in this story? And is there the possibility of a sequel?
And as for school, [hysterical laughter] thank you! I hope so too!
person Jayn
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved the idea of the garden. It was very nice. ^_^ And Its very true about the relationship. I never thought of it that way. Very clever. But now I'm going to stop typing because I have a terrible case of the Hiccups and I keep typing in the wrong letters when I hiccup. Lol. PLEASE update soon!!!