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for Twilight Tales - An Ounce of Kindness

by MPB

person Jayn
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Absolutly beautiful! I love the way the ceremony was!! So detailed and thought through. And they are finally together!! YAY! How happy!! PLEASE update soon! Although I am sad that it seems that my favorite story may be ending, I cannot wait to find out what will happen next!!
person Gingitsune
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! They are finally bonded! Love reading your story as usual. I love the description of their wedding as well as their first night together. May our beloved couple have many more years ahead of them.
person Shanna
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Eresse. Me ha encantado, Legolas y Elrohir al fin juntos. Ha sido maravilloso leerlo porque está muy bien escrito. Un saludo.
person Yanic
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! Finally! Woohoo! Thankyou! I'm blabbering it was so great, I love the LOVE in this chapter, not just smut but a real love story. Aww!
person Blaise
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!! I bet that's what L & E and everyone else is thinking too! (Sticks tongue out and makes childish taunting face at Nimaras..) I didn't get to review previous chapter so I just want to say that I was quite proud of Legolas for his mature decision to wait until they were formally bound; how difficult that must have been! I had mentioned in a previous review that I thought a possible marriage between Galvreth and Dan might precede L& E or perhaps a double marriage; while it didn't occur it certainly seems as if marriage fever has hit MIrkwood...all BUT poor Galvreth! I agree with Thranduil that it was very satisfying to see how the brothers had truly bonded at this time. The bonding ceremony and night were wonderful. I loved Legolas gamut of emotions including his momentary fears and apprehensions. Elrohir was perfect with his mix of lust and understanding. It seems as if Legolas will be quite sore in the morning (at least he doesn't have to endure the ride back as Galvreth did!)
person sesshyangel
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!! AAAHHhh!!! Where to start? I half expected this day to never come! LOL. With all their trials and whatnots, it seemed like so at times. But glad it came. Where to start where to start?? You make reading about those two so...enjoyable despite the numerous stories that I've already read about them. How you do it...I have to give you a round of appalause for that. And the little unexpected character traits, like Thranduil really being a softy and wanting to marry off all his children so that he can have little grandkids running around! You seamlessly weave the humor with the pleasure, the fun with the trepidation, the fear with the joy, the hurt with the triumph! And you do it time and again. Any wonder that we all love you so?
person Sesshyangel
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::slaps forehead:: I forgot! I wanted to ask you about your take on elvish wedding. How much of this is actually cannon, and how much is your own creation?
person Daeomae
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The moment we've been waiting for, their joining in body and spirit, was nothing less than spectacular!! *hugs* Now, if Elladan and Galvreth would just get their act together. *wink* Superb chapter, Eresse. Thanks!


*Mwah*
Dae
person SesshyA
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::Squeal!!:: Awww! That is sooooo...........I don't know, good? Heartwarming? cuddly?? LOL. I like that you had them make a home of their own, both physically and emotionally. That you made it what finally brought them together is brilliant. And of course, I'm happy that they finally are going to be bound.

And only half way through?? That's excellent! LOL. Though it probably will mean more trouble for my golden couple.
person Shanna
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hola Eresse. Estoy feliz, al fin Elrohir y Legolas han solucionado sus problemas y van a casarse ¡qué emocionante! Estoy deseando leerlo. Un saludo.